Sent here through comment swap and I can't actually view the story so I'm not sure what I should be commenting on. I think the layout is beautifully done. It's very compelling which makes me want to read the story even more. The summary has me hooked and from what I've read from that portion your writing seems to be really good! Hopefully this is just a maintenance issue and the story will be put back up for me to read later. :)
November 16th, 2016 at 03:59pm