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I love the layout! It's really fitting for this type of story, I think. :)
The summary is really good. It sounds wonderfully professional and the last few sentences is a good hook. I wish the first chapter was up so I could go check it out. :)
Good job!
November 17th, 2011 at 04:58am
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It sounds good already :)
November 15th, 2011 at 04:55am
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The summary is really good. It sounds wonderfully professional and the last few sentences is a good hook. I wish the first chapter was up so I could go check it out. :)
Good job!