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  • wristbanger

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    I love the layout! It's really fitting for this type of story, I think. :)

    The summary is really good. It sounds wonderfully professional and the last few sentences is a good hook. I wish the first chapter was up so I could go check it out. :)

    Good job!
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:58am
  • McKenna Haner

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    It sounds good already :)
    November 15th, 2011 at 04:55am
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