December 20th, 2011 at 07:05pm
Awesome!! I love astronomy, and am really into it, so this story for me, is extremely interesting. I like how you didn't spend too much time in the past, just going over it in an explanation of his character and what he's like. I can't wait to see what happens at his interview, but I'm also interested in seeing why the other guy with the tattoo's seems like he hates him already.
=D AHHHH I just want to read more!
There are a few grammatical errors where you switch up your tenses but that's cool, you know, no one's perfect. I think this story is going to be a great one for sure. (: