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  • Jasey Rae

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    love it update soon?
    March 28th, 2008 at 01:55am
  • Sunber

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    awhh! Poor Jacob.
    I wonder why tess is so mad about it, maybe Tess is really the good girl...?
    Short comment.
    Sunny-lee <3
    March 28th, 2008 at 01:53am
  • Syriarcina

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    icky tessa XP
    she's jealous of lee and victor
    <333
    March 28th, 2008 at 12:29am
  • Sunber

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    Hahaha!
    I liked how you labeled the picture...in different fonts for each name.
    :)
    I don't like Tessa being mad, but i know a Tessa and don't like her, so this messes up my brain's way of thinking, but besides that, I really liked this chapter. I liked when Victor came out and told Tessa she should leave if she didn't want to listen.
    lol.
    Sunny-Lee <3
    March 27th, 2008 at 09:39pm
  • bloodravyn

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    KILLER
    March 27th, 2008 at 05:54am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Dude,Tessa is a bitch
    Sorry to say,haha !
    But,I loved the chapter
    : )
    March 26th, 2008 at 11:10pm
  • Moira Regina

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    LMAO. Tessa's like shaking, XD
    Oh man, that was hilarious and cute.
    More?
    March 26th, 2008 at 10:35pm
  • bloodravyn

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    HAHA
    LOVED IT!!!
    March 26th, 2008 at 04:50am
  • Moira Regina

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    Your updates seriously make my day. ROFL, handcuffs? Man, this is hilarious; Tessa is just mad funny too.
    March 26th, 2008 at 03:00am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Oh how I love this story
    : )
    March 26th, 2008 at 12:21am
  • Syriarcina

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    victor <3 lee.
    lee <3 victor.
    awwe.
    xD
    March 25th, 2008 at 11:19pm
  • Sunber

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    Oh, well thanks for clearing that up, i'm now officially happy with my original story thinkings. :) I actually really hate this smilie>>> :) cause it's open mouthed,a nd when you put the bracket, that implies that it's closed.
    I liked this chapter, witht he whole 'making a scene' thing.
    Well done!
    More soon right.... right??? RIGHT?!
    Sunny-Lee <3
    March 25th, 2008 at 10:08pm
  • Reaper's Mistress

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    I love this story. I can't wait to read the update.
    Escape
    March 25th, 2008 at 12:17pm
  • Moira Regina

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    I bet a hopeful month. I mean c'mon. lmao. Although I wanna say a week too.....
    hehe I love this story.
    March 25th, 2008 at 04:54am
  • Strange Lifestyles

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    PAGE CLAIM!
    *pokes lightly*
    I have the need to confess that I have no idea if Victor Todd is a real person or not, but I'm betting he is, because you randomly have a different picture of him on every update...
    so this what used to be Original, suddenly turne dinto Fan Fic for me... oddd.... i still like it though.
    It's all, teen love-ish.
    And why is Victor suddenly 25? Is he 25 in the story? how old's Avalee????
    Sunny-Lee <3
    Lol Victor isn't a real person...as far as I know, I just use Garrett Hedlund from Death Sentence as a reference to what I think Victor looks like, and he was playing with Avalee about his age because she called him fifteen, he's 17 or 18 I can't remember what I put him as but he's still in high school.
    March 25th, 2008 at 04:32am
  • Sunber

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    PAGE CLAIM!
    *pokes lightly*
    I have the need to confess that I have no idea if Victor Todd is a real person or not, but I'm betting he is, because you randomly have a different picture of him on every update...
    so this what used to be Original, suddenly turne dinto Fan Fic for me... oddd.... i still like it though.
    It's all, teen love-ish.
    And why is Victor suddenly 25? Is he 25 in the story? how old's Avalee????
    Sunny-Lee <3
    March 25th, 2008 at 03:29am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Lets say a week and a half
    xD
    March 25th, 2008 at 01:44am
  • bloodravyn

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    AWESOME!!!!!
    March 25th, 2008 at 12:44am
  • Emmy-Bear

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    This is my all time favorite story on Mibba.
    Keep up the amazing job.
    March 24th, 2008 at 01:12pm
  • Moira Regina

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    tessa is a riot. she's so random. =)
    March 24th, 2008 at 05:39am
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