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I'm team Jon so as much as I loved this chapter I hated it. Great work though. I didnt like that he was waiting for her creepy :p

Wow Jonathan way to pull a cheap trick by bringing your parents to Dinner.
So glad it didn't work! So proud of Fi for standing up to Jonathan.
I think Jonathan really needed to see that he can't get everything he wants, and also I think she was right he doesn't need a gf he needs a babysitter. And yeah I guess he does love her but I don't think he could change his bad habits and if he did Fi would always question his commitment to her.....
I wonder what Jonathan is gonna say to Vik cause I'm sure he won't let her go that easily....
Loved the chapter!
And since everyone is picking teams..... Team Viktor all the way!!!

NO!! No No No! They need to be together! Ughhh this would be my favorite story, if they'd end together. But I really think they wont which makes me sad

Can't wait for more! I like Viktor but I still feel like she and Jon would be better together.

I dunno, Viktor treats her better but I kinda want Jon to make it up to her and they get together.

I want to cry! i feel so bad for jon. and fi. not really viktor but sorta.

I still believe that Jon is under her skin - but I really am surprised that she chose Viktor. It was kinda creepy that he was waiting for her.

I cant see where this will go over well in the dressing room. Although maybe if Jon truly loves Fiona and wants to see her happy, he will eventually be able to accept it.

WOOOOO GO FIONA!!!(: way to stick up for herself!!! I'm so happy she told Jon off. He doesn't deserve her. Gooo team Vik!(: heehe
Please update soon!

I kinda want Jon to make it up to her, is that so wrong?

She finally said it. Good for her!

Is it bad that I was hoping for Fiona to accidentally call out Jon's name while she was with Viktor?? :/ I mean I want to like Viktor but I just can't leave team Jon!

TEAM VIKTOR!!!!
He is so not "too innocent for Fiona"!

Jon just...he needs to see what kind of man you have to be in order to find/stay with the girl of his dreams. I think he sees Fiona as being one of those girls because she's different than anything he's ever had, but I think his one and only is still out there, and Fiona ending up with Viktor with show him who he has to be.

TEAM VIKTOR!!!!
He is so not "too innocent for Fiona"!

Jon just...he needs to see what kind of man you have to be in order to find/stay with the girl of his dreams. I think he sees Fiona as being one of those girls because she's different than anything he's ever had, but I think his one and only is still out there, and Fiona ending up with Viktor with show him who he has to be.

Sure that was hot but I'm still Team Jon all the way. Fiona is fiery. Jon lights that fire. And my heart broke for him when he realized where she was. :-(

Yay Viktor. But poor Jon. I don't know what team I'm rooting for!?!? Help!

No no no no, Fiona and Jon are endgame, that is all. Still Team Jon, he needs to win her back!

damn... what the hell is jon gonna do to top that? update again soon :]

I am all for Team Viktor now, no Jon lol. Viktor and Fi are so cute together and I feel like Jon will never really want her and just her (he did use her to kick out the plenty of girls that he had in his bed and now he wants only her because he sees the competition lol) love the update and I can not wait to see where this goes!!

I'm sorry...but again, Jon who?

SORRY. I didn't finish my comment, so here it is again! SORRY!

NO. NO. NO. NO!

Usually I'm able to read your *ahem* "scenes", but I just COULDN'T read Viktor and Fiona's. It just seemed so wrong! I understand how everyone likes Viktor cause he's so "sweet", "kind" yada yada yada. But I just can't see them together! Viktor is TOO innocent for Fi. Jon is literally the perfect match for Fiona. I love the two together because they just belong together (hahahaa, that doesn't even make sense!) I can't even explain it! 

Fiona better decide something quick. Because it not, I'm inserting myself into the story and giving Fi a yelling of a life time. She needs to do something because you can't have two things at the same time! Life doesn't work that way, sweetie. 

UPDATE SOON!