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That last line just killed me. It was too perfect. I love how you still stick to the whole 'Captain Serious' image to Jon. I just love the drama you're stirring up here. I have a feeling Jon saw their little kiss there. I absolutely can't wait for more! :)

Jealous Jon is not going to like this one bit. I smell trouble brewing.

well shit jon, you just went and blew it
you have me swooning over Viktor more than I usually do already haha he's just so... dreamy :D all the 'Hawks Swedes are just nice and sweet and gorgeous :)

I'm pretty sure you're going to end her up with Jon somehow anyway, but I'm kinda really hoping that Jon won't get her? sometimes even 'superheroes' like him screw up one too many times and I'd relaly like to see a story where that's how it goes...

aaanyway, feel free to insert as much viktor as possible :D
great chapter!

omg love it! Viktor totally wants her! And he would treat her like a queen, no doubt about it. Can't wait to see the drama unfold! :)

Damn, poor girl is caught between a rock and a hard place with this one... ;)

I'm sorry, but I'm starting to think Fi is an alien...no woman on earth could resist a naked Jonathan Toews! It just doesn't happen!

Fiona is way to strong. Please tell her the prize for being virtuous & cautious is not nearly as amazing and enjoyable as the prize for being weak and giving in to a NAKED Johnny Toews!
Also thanks a lot for making me find yet another Blackhawk attractive. I'm going to have to find a new least favorite team! :-)

How could you resist Jonathan Toews....great update..can't wait for more!

Amazing chapter. I agree with the comment above. This story is more emotional than I thought it would be & I love it. I also can't see how Fiona was able to resist naked Jon - I certainly wouldn't have been able to! I think this story is getting better with each chapter.

That was suuuuch a good chapetterr!!

Love this.

Sweet Baby Jesus - how does Fiona resist a NAKED JONATHAN TOEWS!! Unfricken believable.

And then to climb into bed with him.....yikes. No one has that much willpower.

But I do see Fiona's point - she doesnt want to give Jon what he wants, because then she would become "disposable".
It is just being able to sustain that...she is a better woman than I!!

Totally killing me right now!! I've been waiting for you to uodate forever! This is hands down my favorite yet! Please update soon

i was so excited when i saw that this was updated! this sentence killed me:
Maybe that was the reason he’d been so upset of the idea of her and Viktor - a guy like Stalberg deserved a girl like Fiona. Jon was well aware he fell painfully short.

I love that he can actually see things from Fi's side. I'm really loving how emotional this story is, like they already know they'll end up together, but certain things need to happen/be said first.

I feel a curve ball being pitched - Fiona is not going to give in that easy. She has seen too many girls go through this revolving bedroom to fall victim so soon.

I think Jon is going to have to step up a bit to prove he truly wants Fiona - and not just so no one else can have her.

Cant wait for the next update.

Loving this story so far..can't wait for more!

love it, update soon :)

This has to be my favorite story of your yet! I hope you update soon! I want to know what happens so bad!

Love this!!

Loved it. Such a different side to Jon. Please update again soon!