You Started It - Comments

Great chapter!

gahhh so amazing. please update soon!

Well that didn't take long, now did it?

uh oh what's going to happen next...?!

Haha love the possesive fiesty Jon! so sexy! I also love how Eric Staal made it in here, even though it's a Hawks' story...you should seriously just write one about him when you're done this...you clearly want to ;)

Love this honey.

Can't wait for more!

Possessive Jon = Feisty Jon on the ice. Whodathunkit? ;-) I can't wait for the next chapter!

ahhh that last line! I couldn't be more excited for the next chapter!

Sorry, if Tazer had ahold of my boob, we aint getting out of bed all day!! Fiona must have the self-control of a saint!

There is definite chemistry between Jon and Fiona - Tazer's dark eyes seem to turn green whenever anyone else looks at Fiona. But she is well aware of his "relationships" with women, and is very leary about crossing any lines.

I like how Abby is telling her not to play games with Jon, because he always wins. I can totally see that.

love this!!! i'm so glad she's friends with abby, too. i can't wait to read more! :)

oh my god. i LOVE tazer! this is not at all how i picture him in real life, but i'm loving it. i really like his relationship with fiona so far. i'm expecting a little heartbreak on both sides, and then some action. and i love that you're including the other guys too!

Jon's such a jerk lol.
Looking forward to more! <3

yay a toews story! can't wait for more

yayayayayayayayayyayayyayaayayayyay. i checked every single day for the past week/since you ended the Skinner story for you to have a new one out and IM SO EXCITED. i loved this chapter and curious to see where you go with it.

First of all, I subscribed as SOON as I saw this was out. I didn't care WHO it was about because I knew this was going to be awesome, per usual. But Holy Tazer!!! Didn't foresee anyone writing about Captain Serious being a man-whore, but I like it ;) Can't wait to see what happens!

When I say that you had a new story, I had to stop myself from screaming and waking up my roommate! I'm so excited for this story. As I was reading this, I couldn't help but picture Fiona from Burn Notice. Is she who you're basing your character off of? I absolutely love the idea of someone like her with Man-whore!Jonathan. Again, you never fail to impress me with your stories. You've got me hooked after only reading the first chapter! Can't wait for the next one. :)

i am literally dancing a jig as we speak...awesome start to a story

woot woot! :) whenever you finish a story, I can't wait for the next one!
manwhore jonny sounds... interesting, to say the least hehe
I agree with the kaner acts like jon now jon acts like kaner comment up there hehe cool setup!
btw it's Stalberg, not Stalburg :)

Ooh, another Toews story! I like it, especially how different it is. Any story with an Irish bombshell is bound to be good, especially when she's got that sassiness they're known for. But throw in Jonathan Toews as a man-whore? Perfectly unexpected; gives it a nice twist. So that's it, I'm hooked. Consider me along for the ride :)