Taste of a Poison Paradise - Comments

Gah this chapter was perfect! Of course it would be Harry and Louis who had to kiss. I hope she leeks the tape. It would be so funny XD
and I wonder what happened with Reece :\

OMG THIS CHAPTER
I AM DYING
Niall, the poor guy :c
BUT LOUIS
and your character's inner monologue is killing me.
omg.
please update soon (:

Oh my god, this update was too perfect. x'D

AHHH! I absolutely LOVE this story! I can't wait for an update. Keep up the great work! <3
-MK

This chapter was too funny! I think Alex's character might be my favorite, no offence to Riley or Reece, I love them too but Alex is just hilarious!

LARRY STYLINSON STRIKES AGAIN!! YES! Hahahaha I wonder what other dares are gonna happen? I hope one of the boys gets to kiss one of the girls, and aww, Niall's part with Riley was really cute c: love love love it!!

Ohmygosh, I was dying with this update! The whole truth or dare game was hilarious! And the Larry kiss was fab. My favorite lines were I wanted to rip all of his clothes off and sex the life out of him. and I wondered how lively he’d be during sex… seeing how those are both thoughts I think about Lou myself quite often.
Anyway, I hope Reece is okay and I think Liam going to check on her was adorable! Good ol' Daddy Direction. So excited for more! :D

FINALLY THEY MEET THE BOYS!
I hope Reece will loosen up a bit during a little game of truth or dare. She can't be a bitch the entire tour can she? I mean I love bitchiness don't get me wrong but it's bound to happen right :p
As for the other two girls I can really identify with them for some reason. More with Riley since I'm kind of quiet and awkward as well.
I just love this story and can't wait to see what happens next :)

especially since her gaze was straying down to his crotch.​ I'm dying omg

Glad that they finally met the boys, great update!<3

This reminded me of my dream last night....weird. If you want to hear about it just let me know, ahaha! I won't bother putting it in this comment because that would take away from the OH MY GOSH THIS CHAPTER IS AWESOMEness ;D

I loved the update! The way you described Zayn made me swoon and I'm shipping Alex and Lou already and Riley and Niall. I also hope Reece comes around eventually. She and Harry would be adorable!

RILEY UGH THIS CHAPTER'S SO ADORABLE.
lol "I like food and Obama." oh, Niall.
excuse me while I die.
please update soon, guys c:

RILEY UGH THIS CHAPTER'S SO ADORABLE.
lol "I like food and Obama." oh, Niall.
excuse me while I die.
please update soon, guys c:

HOLY CRAP ON A CRACKER. That part with Louis was just . . .unf. Alex is a lucky little mofo. I hope Reece gets happier or else I'll virtually punch her. And I like Riley, a lot, too.

I UPDATED MY STORY IN CASE YOU WANNA REEEEEEAD IT :)

WHAT EVEN
THEY'RE MEETING THE BOYS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER? D;
AWWWWWWWH, DAMN.
but anyways.
I quite like this chapter, it really shows off their personalities c:
please update soon!

Wow Reece is a bitch!
I like it. :D
I can't wait for them to meet the boyzzzzzzz :)

That was not shit! I LOVED THE UPDATE!<3 :) All of you guys are brilliant writers.
But, yes, back to this chapter. I like how this character is different from the other two.
It's a bit cliche, but I like cliches! Especially in fan fictions. :3 It makes for the perfect story.
I was going to meet the One band I really didn't want to meet. - I see what ya did there with the whole capitalizing "One". x) Nice, very nice.
Can't wait for the next update!

I love how outspoken Alex is! She just tells it like it is and I don't find it rude if anything Reece is but I don't blame her. I would act the same way if someone entered me in a Justin Bieber contest haha.
In a way I could relate to all of these girls which makes this story even better.

awh, Reece is such a party pooper):
I really love how Alex is so not shy though, that's definitely sure to break through Reece!
and Riley's just so adorable c:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Goodness. Jacob sounds adorable. I hope he comes back later on but if not we have five lovely boys who have yet to make an appearance :)
This was a very good chapter! I could see the difference between the three girls right off the bat which I really like since I have a hard time with different personalities apart from my own.
This story is just wonderful and I am waiting(not very patiently I might add) for the boys to appear. I just want to see how they react to the three girls.

awh, Reece doesn't seem too keen of anyone in this chapter, poopers):
BUT I'M SURE SHE'LL FALL IN LOVE.
anyways.
please update soon, guys!(:
this story's so wonderful, asdhfklashdcf.