Taste of a Poison Paradise - Comments

FINALLY I FOUND A ONE DIRECTION FIC. :D
I'm enjoying it so far, but the last paragraph needs to add it spaces between paragraph. :)

Ahhh, gosh. I just love this SO much. I can't wait until you update it. Definitely subscribing :)

OOH, I love the huge difference in Reece's character c:
AND I LOVE THAT HER BEST FRIEND IS A BOY THAT LOVES 1D.
my dream boy. can I marry him?
BUT ANYWAYS.
it's nice that she's leaving home, then, because she gets to ditch the rude-ass dad, but she'll be leaving Adrian):
BUT STILL. SHE'LL BE MEETING 1D.
please update soon! :D

I really like this so far. I love how different all of the characters are! I can't wait to see what happens when they all meet, and then when they meet the boys!

Oh geez...her dad is such an ass. At least she will get away from all of that crap. If I won a contest with someone I didn't like and my situation at home was that bad I would leave too...But honestly who couldn't love them? I am sure her opinion will change once she meets them. I really liked the chapter! Normally I don't care for group stories but I do like this one. You can tell just how different each of the girls really are.

Ooooh I liked this chapter. I can already tell I'm gonna like Alex. Awesome :)

Ah a prankster! That should be interesting once they are on the road :p Even though we don't know much about Alex I already like her. You can tell that she is pretty unique. I wish Andrew could come along because he seems interesting as well.
Can't wait to hear about the rest of the girls who will be on tour.

I love Alex already.
and not just because her name is my name.
hehehoho c:
I LOVE THE SMOKE BOMB.
please update soon!

Well the plot is very, very unique for me. And nicely done regarding the writing. I can't wait for more. Tell me if you have updated by the way. :3

This is super great! :D I love how you portrayed Simon (;

Ooooooh my goodness I like this story. Please update soon? :)

SIMON COWELL IS NICE THO. o;
but oh my goodness askdfhalskdhfasd.
going on tour with ONE DIRECTION.
o lawd.
I'd die of orgies.
please update soon, oh goodness, this story is beautiful c:

Gosh, I can't even imagine spending the whole summer on tour. If only that could actually happen *sighs* but my parents would never let me go. They wont even let me go with out them to a different state for a week...I even have family there D: (I'll even be eighteen by the time I would go pfft) Anyway, awesome starter chapter! I loved the whole bit when you said "the lord is testing me." I actually laughed out loud :p
& I can't wait to meet the other girls and see what they will be like! I can already tell that this is going to be a good one!

GACKLE ::excited:

Waiting (very unpatiently)!

I really like how the summary is the contest rules. I think that's rather smart, and is a nice spin on the whole 'contest winners' plot. It'll be interesting to see what you do with this, as it's a common plot :) I'm very intrigued and cannot wait for more.

I like it so far. Please continue. :)

I am extremely intrigued! I can't wait for the first chapter!

Sounds really interesting! I like the plot you guys have for the story. It gives enough information without revealing a lot of what is to come. I can't wait to see where this story goes. :)