Adam 2.0 - Comments

Squeee I'm about to start this! I have a hard time starting stories that aren't finished (bc they turn out to be good and then I'm left hanging), but I love your writing and am going to read it nonetheless!

Did you give up on this? :(

@ orange county.
Thank you for the comment! And the corrections! I just fixed them--can't believe I missed them during the proofreading. I usually can't spot my own typos since I can always "predict" my sentences xd

@ silk tea.
Aww, thank you! :D Hehe, I'm glad you noticed because naming her Eve would have been too cliche (even for me lol). Pandora is the first human woman created in Greek mythology, though she does have a lot in common with Eve, what with being blamed for the fall of humanity and reason for all the evil in the world hahahaha

I guess creation myths just hate women.

I've just read the first chapter for now, but this story is so intriguing and already so brilliant. Yes, it is a little bit of an infodump. But it is a pretty necessary one, and the writing is endearing enough that you almost forget about how much information you're being given.

There were a couple of typos that I noticed;
"Just when I taught my mother and I" - should be thought.
"Those years were one of the worst" - should either be that year or, "one of", should be removed.
"balance his family as his brilliant invention" - should be and.
"A riot at broken out" - should be had.

Other than that, I'm really excited to continue reading this, and plan to leave a bunch more comments as I work my way through it. I especially loved the science-y bit at the beginning comparing Adam's mechanical birth to Pandora's natural, human birth.

I just read the first chapter and I'm super impressed. I'm really excited to continue reading git and I totally see this having incredible potential to be an absolutely brilliant story. I really love the fact that he's named Adam and she's Pandora--not Eve. Kind of like she holds all the wonder and tragedy and bad things for mankind that Pandora's box hold. I'm excited to keep reading!

LOOOOOOL WOMEN FLASH HIM I'M CRYING
ADAM, EXPLORER OF THE UNIVERSE
WHAT ELOQUENCE OH MY GOD

Adam smirking
7000% positive he looks incredibly attractive while doing so
omg though the parallel between the creation of Galatea and Adam!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I still laugh at her screaming that she could use a drink

I adore everything about this story! Beautifully written and super creative, I really like it. I'm really glad you came back to Mibba and you're going to continue with this story because I'm deeply invested in the lives of Pandora and Adam.

ADAM IS A GENIUS
I LOVE HIM
AND THIS
AND U

I just found this, and I love it so far! Recommending and subscribing <3

i have fallen in love with this story all over again

It's funny, I was just thinking about this the other day and wondered what happened to it.
I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

When I saw the e-mail saying this is being updated I screamed. I've been waiting for this for a long time.

When I saw the e-mail saying this is being updated I screamed. I've been waiting for this for a long time.

I really like this, so I'm going to subscribe. I've already recommended it.

Yay I'm glad this is back!

Is it her wanting to actually come back verses her being slightly apprehensive, then that's what I noticed!

correct me if I'm wrong though! ;~;

i like :) can't wait