Adam 2.0 - Comments

*interal screaming intensifies*

SO EXCITED!!

Wow. It could make a great movie. I'm hooked, good job!

Oh my God I'm so excited and can't wait for where this goes!

I've recently found this story and absolutely felt in love with it. The first chapter alone had me stuck in the computer, reading. The way you describe Pandora's feelings towards her father, her father's work and Adam is absolutely amazing. I haven't read far away yet. I'm at chapter where Pandora meets Adam 2.0 and their interaction was just something that I wished I witness. I could not imagine actually talking or interacting with a robot that is life-like and I think the reason I'm loving the story so much is not only because it's unique and great but also because it's not far from a not so distant future/truth. Technology is so advanced that I wouldn't be surprise if we could have our Adam sometime. To be honest your writing style is amazing and just the way you manage to detail every feeling and interaction is great. I could see this story turn out until a published novel and please do not give up on it because it's just mesmerizing and great. Great Job!

Can't wait where this goes.

This is one of the only fics I've ever read that actually rivalled my favourite published books. You write like an already established author. Disappointed to see that you've moved on from Mibba, I'd really like to read the end of this story. I also plan on checking out the other stories you've written in the meantime.

Bummed that you haven't written in a while

I absolutely adore your way with words. I cannot, for the life of me, string stuff together anymore, like you can. I love the idea for this story, how it seems so real and believable. I love your main character, and how she's not a Mary Sue or some predictable dumb girl. And I absolutely cannot even get over how well thought out this all is, how it actually COULD have been the write up of a movie. Honestly, I'm in love. I don't know how often you update this but I don't care, regardless, I'm here to read it!

...Update time? I really miss this story, even though it's only been two months... :(

My eyes are dying right now, but I promise I'll make time to read this. Also, you have inspired me to take up where I left off with my stories. I just haven't had the time and inspiration to do it, but I'm gonna work harder now. I'm thinking of rewriting Touch of Ivory, making it more realistic. Hopefully, when I go on vacation (where I have no internet) I will sit my butt down and write it :D

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I love this so much. It's so perfect. I'm so bad at gushing and you deserve such a better message, but this is the best that I can do!!

I totally believe you can be published. Especially with rocking stories like this. I mean - this is golden enough! It's soooo great

I'm so in love

sigh <3<3<3<3<3<3

Ahh I haven't read it yet but I just wanted to say that I found you because you had super pretty layouts and I thought, "I'd like to read a story with a pretty layout" and it sounds stupid but hey whatever.

Alsso EEHHHH you're on Project Fiction so I know without even reading it that it's going to be good

I'll report back in 7 chapters :)

I've taken a couple days to catch up with this story. Holy cow, this is amazing. I'm picturing the movie all the while I'm reading it and seriously, this could be made into a movie. You have such an incredibly strong plot line. Keep up the great work!

I love the scene with the cops, and the sudden feelings that seem to engulf Pandora during these hard times for her. But I have a single question: What year is this? I'm not quite sure if you ever told us, the readers, that or not, but I'm very curious to know.

I love the scene with the cops, and the sudden feelings that seem to engulf Pandora during these hard times for her. But I have a single question: What year is this? I'm not quite sure if you ever told us, the readers, that or not, but I'm very curious to know.

The second chapter, you took my breath away with Pandora and Adam bonding so quickly. Truly amazing.

I read the first chapter, and the detail and emotions were so intense that I was immediately drawn into the story you had created. I'll try to read the second chapter, but it's getting late, so I may not have the time. But thank you for sharing such an amazing work of art with us.

omg this is wonderful. I love Adam so much, it is ridiculous. He and Pandora are just perfect.
Update this soon! :)

This is amazing. I cannot believe she got naked in front of him like that! But you wrote it very tastefully, it didn't seem raunchy or smutty at all. I like Adam, he's very complex, albeit a little annoying.

Adam Levine.
oh, how awkward that would be!
REESE WOULD ACTUALLY BE HIS DAD THEN. lol.
it took me like. 20 minutes to realize that.
BUT THIS CHAPTER WAS SO DRAMATIC, OH MY GOSH! D:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

AH! I love this story!! Renewed faith in Mibba, finally! (This just made my day!)