Adam 2.0 - Comments

I love this already! I can't wait to see how Adam's going to try and find his 'father' and if he'll ever figure it out. I loved all of the mythology and how you used such great imagery in all of the chapters. Just beautiful, man :") I can't wait to read more about the explorer of the universe!

ohmagawd this story is so addicting that I basically pine over my computer for another update from you.

just thought you should know.

Lol this is a great story and I hope that it continues and lives on. I AM TOTES IN LOVE.

you are a wonderful person.
oh my goodness.
I love you.
there are only so many truly good original fiction stories out there, and you should be proud that this is most definitely one of them.
please update soon!

...I think they should do it

The update is beautiful.

I'm only on chapter three.
BUT
THIS IS BRILLIANT
What a perfect idea.
And you've started out very well. I like how you give all the background but you don't make it boring or anything. All of it is intriguing. I can see their personalities so clearly.

Adam is so funny.
Update soon! :)

named after the goddess of silence
I think I'm gonna die.
I love this story.

Wow, those city scenes look amazingly futuristic and grim.
Thanks for the update!

I want to go BANG BANG BANG with a gun at Adam. He's kind of mean. And MUTA? I fell out of my chair for that. They are two so very interesting characters, and obviously so different! I love it! Update soon.

This is amazing. You write with such talent, you fill your characters out properly, you know how to make the reader develop a taste for your writing and you know how to make the reader want more. The words flow beautifully, you have definitely earned yourself a subscriber. I love this so far.

I. LOVE. THIS.
The idea you have for this story is fantastic. I love that she's going to learn how to be human from a robot. And Adam! I love everything about Adam.

*subscribes* I love you. xD Beyond all expectations of robot stories! *huggles the story*

Oh my goodness. This story is beyond Mibba quality. I absolutely love it.
You're one talented writer.

Please update soon.

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant (:

I absolutely adore this story. The summary captured my full attention, and the first couple of paragraphs won me over; your writing is beautiful! The idea, your characters, the wording of your sentences, everythings just perfect and it led me to an immediate subsription. I would give you constructtive criticism, but I honestlly don't think this story could be improved further, it can't get any better! I just hope you don't stop updating the story like IGTWD. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Um, I don't really know any bad things to say about this story...
Like, the pacing of this is kinda slow but I think that's just because it takes a long time to update this. So as like months go by for us, like not even a day goes by in the story.

But this is so good. I love Adam. Update soon!

I love this story so much! It's defiantly one of a kind. Great job on it!

this story is absolutely perfect.
it immediately caught my attention and it's just catchy.
i'm very excited to read more.
<3

Please write more, this is so captivating!