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I was wondering myself whether Lynsander or Dakota would have any sort of musical talent given that their father is Zacky V, so it's nice to see her with the piano.

I actually hadn't even thought of them getting the fans involved, but that's definitely a good idea. (I mean, we're pretty crazy... and a good number of us are willing to do just about anything for those boys.) I really hope they can make some headway soon.

As I've said, I really love this story. Can't wait for more!

Hey! It's Rosalia from Fanworks. I have arrived to mibba to find another Zacky father story to tug at my heart strings. I absolutely love this already. My favorite moment thus far I have to say is the father/son hug. That was all I wanted ever since they first met and when it finally happened I really wanted to yell and scream in victory, but alas, my family was asleep :(

I love the way you develop both Lysander and Zacky's characters. The shock that Zacky goes through when finding out about him, the awkward encounters between them, Lysander not wanting to burden a father he has never met, just everything you put in your work about their feelings is just so spot on and genuine I don't know how anyone would dislike this story. It is so believable and easy to visualize as scenes happen and I am really enjoying that about this story. Kudos to you because going from reading Second Chance (one of my all time favorites EVER) to reading this, I can see how much better of a writer you have gotten as if I wasn't jealous already lol.

Favorite things that have happened thus far since I am mashing about six chapters into one review: the fact that both Zacky and his dog already are protective of Lysander! Love the name by the way and it was a total 'aw' moment. Secondly, I loved how nonchalant Lysander was while punching a guy in the face. He is my new hero. That was BA to the max.

I want to find Dakota! I know she will fulfill my dreams of just slamming into Zacky and giving him the biggest hug ever upon meeting him. That is the dumbest reason, I am aware but it needs to happen. I also want her back because Lysander misses her and he loves her, but mainly because I want them to be a happy family. I am weird, this I know. I should care about this boy who lost his twin, I sort of do, but I'm a sucker for the father/child relatio0nship.

My only suggestion is to get Gena's take on things. I feel she is kind of being left out. While I know she isn't Lysander's mom and he maybe leary of mother-like figures with the loss of his own mother, I feel that she needs to be included at least a little bit more because she is obviously a big part of Zacky's life and of course his son is also;therefore, it is critical that they get along and I wish to see how that goes. This probably won't happen for a while though because the most important thing is to get to know his own father and then hopefully things fall into place. Also, there is the question of how she responds to finding all this out about her husband. How he has a family that is in a way without her. I am interested to get inside her mind and see what is going on. I am totally fine with whatever you decide to do because it is turning out utterly amazing so far and I am totally addicted. Impeccable job!

Okay, I've found another story to be obsessed with.

I wanted to check out your stories as soon as we'd talked about originality in stories, and I'm really glad I did. I really love the plot of this story and again, I haven't seen anything remotely like it. I think that Zacky is going to prove to be a great father, even though he's still really lost and unsure of himself. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing all the guys' reactions to Lynsander. :)

And I know I've already told you this, but you're a really great writer. Can't wait to read more

NOW THAT IS WHAT I'M TALKING 'BOUT!
I am fully behind Lysander 100% with him decking that boy in the face. Nicely done! A very well delivered shot.
I'm really loving this story my friend.
I'm sure the upcoming chapters will be just as awesome. No contest.

love this but please bring the sista into it lol i want to know what happened to her lol

You had such perfect timing with this update. I needed it after the day I had yesterday.

I can't even explain how much I love you and it right now.

I can't believe I didn't see sexual preference as the reason for Jack's bullying. Especially since that's one of the main reasons why many people get bullied these days..
I was so proud of Lysander for standing up for Jack. It was so brave of him to do something like that.
I love that Lysander didn't care what anybody else thought of him, but he was worried about what Zacky would think if he found out. I have no doubt in my mind that if ever did, he too would be proud of Lysander.

This chapter had many of those moments where I just sit here, completely into a story. Then something that I absolutely love happens and I let out an unhuman noise from how happy/proud/asdflk I am. =D

It was amazing and I can't wait for the next update. xD

I am so proud of Lysander for what he did! Sticking up for Jack took courage, especially since he's so new. He did good! And despite the fact that he was worried about his dad finding out, I believe Zacky would have been proud of him, too. MAN! This was perfect. I loved it c:

Loved this one, as usual.
Definitely looking forward to seeing if Zacky ends up finding out about the "fight". I wonder what he'd say.
And do I smell a love interest around the corner? I think so.
Loved this, love you.
Update soon!
<3

Even better the second time around c: I wish I could remember the comment I left last time! But, as you already know, I'm in love with this story and can't wait for an update <3

or I may be blind lol either way an update would be awesome!

So have to say that I'm subscribed because I immediatly fell in love with this story. The way you've written it kind of makes me feel like it is a personal experience or close to that. I can't wait to see another update loks like there hasn't been one in a while so please update soon. :)

Another flawless story! I can not wait to see what happens with Lysander and Zacky, and how their relationship pans out. And if Dakota's every found. I love this!

My question as of now is how the hell have I never subscribed to your stories? This is brilliant. I am now officially subscribed and can't wait for the next update. Cheers, love!

I love this! As much as 'Crash Into Me'
You're an excellent writer.

Loved it, as usual.
So excited Lysander is making friends! Maybe a love interest? Would love to see that happen.
Fell ill? Get better!
Update soon, babe.
<3

Loved the update, as always. :)
I actually read it last night. I was already in bed ready to sleep when I remembered I hadn't read it yet. I quickly grabbed my iPod and started reading. I don't think I would've been able to sleep otherwise. :p

Anyway, I loved seeing Lysander sorta interact a little bit with a couple classmates. I loved how you described that little stalker moment Lysander had with Eliza Beth. :p Honestly, I just loved that you didn't use words like "hot" or "sexy" to describe her. I see that too much..
I already know I like Jack. :) I think he's gonna be a great friend to Lysander. I'm curious as to why he has a problem with bullies, though. At the moment, I kind of see him getting into trouble with those bullies and having Lysander come to the rescue. Maybe in a future chapter? :p
I don't know about anybody else, but I absolutely loved the section where he had to write about something. It was nice to kinda see the situation in his perspective, in his own writing...I'm not sure if I'm making any sense.. :p

I don't think this story is getting the feedback it deserves. That makes me sad, people are definitely missing out..

Anyway, I hope to see an update soon. xD

update soon please

I freaking love it
I really can't wait for the next chapter xxxx

Awesome Story! your friend katrina recommended it :)

UPDATE SOON!

I like the way this story is going so far! :) Keep up the great work