Lost - Comments

seems like its gonna be a pretty good story

I totally feel your pain with having a busy life, but I'm glad you managed to update, and it was a long one too!!!!!

Aw! A touching moment between father and son I LOVED IT! Can't wait for more. :)

I love it.

Aww, that was cute! I love their relationship already, and I wonder when (if) Dakota comes into their lives, how it will affect everything.

Loved it, update soon!

I love this story so much! Keep up the good work! <3

I'm so glad you decided to update today. You have no idea how happy I was when I got the email. xD

As always, I loved this chapter.
Just knowing that Zacky and Lysander are trying to have a father/son relationship makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. I love it. :p

I was so into the story. When Lysander started explaining what happened the night he found his mom, I literally started tearing up.. just imagining that scene was awful..

So far, I love how Zacky is dealing with being a father, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter.
Update soon, please? ;)

By the way, I love the name you chose for their sixth album. xD

Update soon love this

My comments are few, but, like usual, you deserve them. I could go on and on about how I wish I could write like you and how you're writing takes me to beautiful places, but I think that's already known. So I'll keep this short.

You're a beautiful writer. Don't give up. And for God's sake, update soon!

bout time she was mentioned! I really hope Zacky can pull his ass together, otherwise I vote that Matt adopts them...just saying.

love this please please update soon

Ah Columbus, Wisconsin I know the area well and I absolutely love that you used it in this story. :)
The plot thickens I love how you set it up. IT IS ABSOLUTELY awesome! I really cannot wait for the third chapter. I adore the names Dakota and Lysander they are so awesomely exotic!
I love it Hayls! Absolutely ADORE it!

I'm waiting anxiously the next chapter. The story is original and very intriguing, I'm loving it!

I literally screamed when I got the email for this update. Wasn't expecting it today. :)

That being said, I loved the update!

I loved Zacky's reaction to finding out he also had a daughter, and that she has been taken. All that information in one day...poor guy. :/

I wasn't expecting things to happen that way. I knew that conversation was coming, but it felt like I had no idea Dakota was missing. I was still shocked as I read...and I loved every second of it. :)
I also wasn't expecting their mother's death to be a murder. That's crazy...

Anyway, I look forward to the next update. xD

*sigh* I can't get over how much I love Lysander's name. :p

I love this!! It was so worth following you here to read :) I can't wait for the update!

I want to know when the sister comes in!

WOW!
Brian has a wittle baby and I love the name its so pretty!!!
I seriously can't wait to see how Gena is going to react. Will it be calm or will she blow a gasket? I am seriously excited to find out!

LOVE IT! I can't wait to see how Gena is going to react.
I love that this is set in the future and Arin is officially in the band :D
Also love that Brian has a baby! I didn't see that one coming..

Hopefully we get to see what Zacky's son is like soon.
Looking forward to the next update :)

Oh my god, update soon please!
Love it!

Hurry and post the first chapter!
:3