The Outcome - Comments

That's a really good story. I like all stories about Jacob. You're writing skills are amazing and deff gonna try to keep up with this one. Great chapter and please update soon. If you have any tips or any advices you can give me also for writing the way you do send me a message I'd apreciate alot. :D

That's a really good story. I like all stories about Jacob. You're writing skills are amazing and deff gonna try to keep up with this one. Great chapter and please update soon.

I really like the story
Erick could back off at least a little so that Macie can have some form of a normal life but I guess that’s not going to happen now that Jacob is coming in to the picture.
I love Seth’s comment about Jacob having a thing for clumsy girls cause Bella was way to clumsy lol anywhore Please update soon

I don't really read Twilight fan-fics as I don't necessarily like them because they've never been my cup of tea. However, I think that you're a very good writer and I honestly did enjoy reading this. It was very descriptive and it seemed to capture my attention throughout my reading. Great job! :)

Okay I normally don’t go for the Twilight fan-fics only because the authors seem to be stuck on how to properly write portray the characters. You seem to do a good job at it though. I also love how descriptive you are. Good job and keep up the good work.

I love Twilight (that probably sounds weird coming from a girl who loves Harry Potter, The Hunger Games, AND Twilight.. oh well. Silly me!) and I got so excited when this popped up in the comment swap thing!
I loved Jacob on the books, and in a lot of jake fanfictions, the authors don't give the character justice. but you did, which is impressive! I like where the story is going, and I cannot wait to read more!!! keep up the good work!!!! :-)
the only thing I would maybe work on is just adding a little more detail into Jake's thoughts. other than that, the story's great!!
((sorry for posting twice, this is literally the third time tonight that my comment was cut off!! I hate my computer. sorry!!!))

I love Twilight (that probably sounds weird coming from a girl who loves Harry Potter, The Hunger Games, AND Twilight.. oh well. Silly me!) and I got so excited when this popped up in the comment swap thing!
I loved Jacob on the books, and in a lot of jake fanfictions, the authors don't give the character justice. but you did, which is impressive! I like where the story is going, and I cannot wait to read more!!! keep up the good work!!!! :-)