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  • Cupcake1

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    Great chapter! If this guy's an asshole I think she should stop focusing on him and what he did to her.
    March 12th, 2012 at 04:14am
  • katiexlee

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    I love this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!
    March 11th, 2012 at 10:23pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    I'm so glad that you updated! Oh gosh, where to begin. I'm dying to know what was going through James's mind when he saw her scars. I really love reading his point of view. It's interesting to know how other people see her because her own self-view is so warped. I'm a bit curious though, she said he was judging her when they first met, and he even admitted it. But then he said he thought she was attractive. So what was he thinking when they first met; how was he judging her appearence? And Jordan is an ass. I'm glad that James was upset by the way he treated her. James doesn't seem as depressed as she seemed to think he was at the end of the last chapter. Lonely and out of place but he seems stable. I'm dying to know who this mystery abusive asshole is. And I'm very curious to see what the next steps are in their hopefully impending friendship. Please update soon! I'm really into this story! Oh and I had to look up timorous! I mean, I connected it to timid but I had to check just to be sure because I've never heard it before. I LOVE when authors use words that I don't know! So thank you! :)
    March 11th, 2012 at 09:26pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    I absolutely love it! It's so thought provoking and real. Relatable, unfortunately. Please update soon? I'll be waiting :)
    February 27th, 2012 at 12:58am
  • Cupcake1

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    Can't wait for more!
    February 22nd, 2012 at 04:05pm
  • dreamerforever

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    Not much else that I can say that hasn't already been said. I just can't wait for more! *subscribes*
    February 20th, 2012 at 03:32am
  • BBB23

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    Really good job! You convey the emotions of the characters so well! Can't wait to read more :)
    February 18th, 2012 at 07:27pm
  • laxluvr14

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    This is so amazing! Can't wait for the next update!
    February 13th, 2012 at 05:36am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I'm so in love with James, so I'm glad you're writing a story about him! <3
    February 13th, 2012 at 05:32am
  • NMT82

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    Can't wait for an update. Really curious to know about her past and how she got the broken leg. Great writing.
    February 13th, 2012 at 04:14am
  • leolion1234

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    This is a really unique kind of writing style, and I really like it! Update soon!!!
    February 12th, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • KayPx3

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    great chapter i was really happy you put max in there :]
    February 12th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • leolion1234

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    This story seems very interesting so far. I want to know what happens next!!
    February 12th, 2012 at 07:33am
  • NMT82

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    Really interesting so far.
    February 8th, 2012 at 09:44am
  • KayPx3

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    love it so far cant wait for more :]
    February 8th, 2012 at 06:45am
  • hurricane9

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    Love it!!
    February 6th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • Hannah'sRegret

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    so excited to see where this goes!
    February 6th, 2012 at 04:42am
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