I Wanna Be Somebody - Comments

This seems quite lovely, really. I'm not really into the whole super heavy metal thing like these bands seem to be, but I could still read it and enjoy it. It's nice to see things and stories from the musician's point of view and such. I really liked the very first chapter - I loved how you described the energy within the crowd and everything. It was great, because I always get the chills when I go to shows and I feel like I'm really connecting with the musician and the others around me, it's an amazing feeling and you captured it perfectly, even with just a few short sentences. It was brilliant. Also, you said that those were your own lyrics? They're marvelous. You truly are a talented writer, darling. I think that some day you could really be a song writer or something of the sort. :)

I love it!!!! Finally someone slaps that &*$%#! I'd have given her a lot more.
“Shirtless, wet men? Yes, yes it,” yea sounds like something I'd say hahaha

I love it. It was funny and slapping people you hate is always fun. Ha ha. Great chapter and I still want to know what the hell Crystelle is doing.

I love it. Especially with the twins screaming so loud.

Yikes!!!!!!! Jess is scary when she's sick

I liked it. I wouldn't mind having blue hair.

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha you, my friend, are an evil genius!!!!!!

I liked the new characters... well minus Crystelle.

Ha ha love it jackrabbits on crack. I also thought their fan Olli was cute. Great chapter.

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Looks at nails with a bored expression while playing with a very large knife* Ya know, I can always take care of that little Crystelle problem for you. I mean Morrigan is the name of the Celtic goddess of war.

Uh oh! Things between Mark and Michael are getting a tad sticky

I love the new chapter and layout. When she blushed I was like ooohhh and awww.

Oh yeah, I just read until the second chapter. It's almost 3 am here and it's time for me to sleep. But, I'm subscribing so I'll definitely come for more. ^_^

I love the definition of music as stated in the summary. It really draws me into the story, like it told me that the story is about band making music that is their life. Erm... am I putting that right? Ah, well, anyways, I like it. And the layout is also very interesting. It's not too distracting and the color doesn't hurt my eyes.

The writing style for this story is good and the flow is just amazing. I love the scene you used as the intro, it really set the mood for the story and made me feel kinda energetic, as if I was the one at the show. That's amazing.

It's good to see Riv and Isaac have worked things out.

hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha wow!!!!!! Gotta love the twins!

Awesome chapter, drunk singing is always fun, I guess, never been drunk before. Anyways I loved it.

Oohh pink hair. Not a good look... well unless you are Nicki Minaj. I love it, I can't wait for the next and I'm glad she finally came clean to Isaac.

Pink?!? PINK?!?!?!?!? Poor River! Lol

I love the new chapters. So funny and a little sad when the nightmare happened.