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  • Ice_Cat

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    hahahahahaha wooow!
    March 23rd, 2012 at 02:18am
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    ...HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!
    March 20th, 2012 at 11:57pm
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    LOVED the last chapter!!!!!! Love those guys.
    March 19th, 2012 at 10:09pm
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    I'm glad there is some happiness going around. Yay.
    March 15th, 2012 at 09:57pm
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    I love the new chapters. Very sad, depressing, and I loved all the original song lyrics.
    March 14th, 2012 at 11:40pm
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    Hmmmmmm interesting. Personally I'd go for Jake but I can see why Riv would prefer Isaac
    March 9th, 2012 at 03:51am
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    I love it. I really enjoy the drama. Don't know why but I do.
    March 8th, 2012 at 06:10pm
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    Oh wow!!!!!!!!
    March 7th, 2012 at 11:15pm
  • Ice_Cat

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    I like this chapter. She reminds me a bit of myself at the end
    March 2nd, 2012 at 05:09am
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    Great new chapter. Really funny too.
    March 2nd, 2012 at 02:51am
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    "Give it back, you perverted-minded, Swedish dingbat!" hahahahahahaha this cracked me up!
    lol the Finnish hobbit. Gotta love it.
    March 1st, 2012 at 08:48am
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    hahahahahaha Jake drunk cracks me up!
    February 27th, 2012 at 03:42am
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    hahahahahaha Jake drunk cracks me up!
    February 27th, 2012 at 03:42am
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    New chapter is awesome. I love the guitars.
    February 25th, 2012 at 05:45am
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    Whoot Jake!! Beautiful guitars!!!!!!!!
    February 24th, 2012 at 11:04pm
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    I finally got around to reading this and I really like it. Sucks I took so long getting here.
    February 23rd, 2012 at 07:29pm
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    I like Roy. He gives good advice.
    February 22nd, 2012 at 07:33pm
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    The title got the WASP song stuck in my head. XD Forgot how much I liked it, haha. From the summary, the story sounds really interesting.

    First chapter has excellent description. I love imagery, so this was a great start, and as a first chapter it did well. No overwhelming explanation, but not too vague. Keeps the reader's attention and leaves them wanting more!

    The second chapter was great, too. It really introduced the characters further, and did a good job of showing the group dynamics without being too wordy. I'm already feeling kind of sorry for the main character, and hoping she'll be able to overcome the trust issues, and that whatever's making Isaac somber won't be too bad. Already caring about the characters. Good job. :)

    I definitely like the story, and the way it's about a band, without being cheesy or stereotypical. It's refreshing, and I'm going to try to read more later, but for now I don't really have the time. But it's really good! :)
    February 22nd, 2012 at 03:15am
  • Ice_Cat

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    Whoot another one!!
    February 22nd, 2012 at 12:46am
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    I love how real the characters are.
    As in I can actually picture exactly what they're doing with all their right mannerisms.
    Nice work!
    February 21st, 2012 at 09:24pm
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