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  • InactiveUser90

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    This is fantastic, wonderful wonderful piece. Original which is a breath of fresh air when you read as many stories as I do. I must say I love guitarists too ;) I liked that each chapter was a song title; that is something that really makes a difference to people who follow the band. You are a wonderful writer and I think this story is absolutely lovely. I hope you continue to write, it would be a crying shame of you didn't. Once again, amazing, original, wonderful story.
    March 17th, 2014 at 07:41am
  • CountryGirl712

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    I didn't read the whole thing but.. wow! You obviously put so much time and effort into this, which is a great quality to have as an writer! I just realised from the comments that each title of the chapter is a song title. Very clever... This is so incredibly detailed and well written. Good job and keep writing.
    September 15th, 2013 at 08:52pm
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    I have read this ever since you started posting this and I still read it again and again. This is one of my favourites and I just want to say, you did a hell of a job with this one. I mean, who doesn't love A7X, WWII and Band of Brothers. This story really does stand out with the plot, the historic detail, everything.
    May 10th, 2013 at 01:25pm
  • QueenSuperficial

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    Awesome, I love Band of Brothers and A7X :)
    February 5th, 2013 at 11:20am
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    @ QueenSuperficial

    Hey thanks for the comment. Yes, Somerville is based on Winters. Out of the main characters O'Shea is Malarkey and Pagliaro is Guarnere.
    February 4th, 2013 at 08:50pm
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    I recognize scenes from Band of Brothers and characters as well. Somerville is based on Winters, right? I love it so far!
    February 4th, 2013 at 05:01pm
  • purple89

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    I love this!! Im on Chapter 2..."Corporal? Oh hell no...." lol.....i laughed so hard at the Sonic the Hedgehog jab...teehee
    October 30th, 2012 at 12:50pm
  • purple89

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    i love how each chapter is a song title....and i'm just going through the summary page.....
    October 30th, 2012 at 12:15pm
  • sarcasmpucktail

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    Comment swap keeps bringing me to Avenged Sevenfold stories and I'm finding that most of them are very well written and read like original fiction rather than a story about a band. Your story was no exception and I enjoyed reading it. You did a great job with the plot and I loved reading the descriptions of each character. The people and story came alive. Keep up the great work.
    June 8th, 2012 at 07:03pm
  • Before 1975;

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    I'm so glad to get to read a complete piece! This was really good. The time travel twist is really great, and helps to hook the reader. I don't know anything about this band, but the way you portrayed the members makes them seem like really interesting and complex people. Hats off to you! The story is glorious.
    June 8th, 2012 at 06:35pm
  • outtahereyall

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    woo, avenged sevenfold! i was sent here from comment swap, woo. wooo for dana slapping him in the face, he deserved that one, for sure. i'm not sure of brian's immediate hatred for her, there has to be a bit more of a reason. i've never seen people act that way without some premeditation. the sudden change though, that works. i love the whole time travel-y mystique here because it's so different and not something that i ese done in a7x fics a lot (and trust me, i read more of them than i probably should). your characterizations, though a bit funny, are nicely done and i like how you portray matt and his girl :-) keep it up with your other stories!
    June 8th, 2012 at 05:43pm
  • natalia;

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    I literally loved every bit of this story!
    It was just too amazing <333
    And I mean it!
    But I'm so sad that it's over </3 :(
    You should make a sequel!!
    June 5th, 2012 at 02:41am
  • xxTillMyLastBreathxx

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    :( It's over.... BUT IT WAS AMAZING!!!!
    March 28th, 2012 at 08:25am
  • Lacey-Nights

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    I'm so sad it's over!!!!
    I loved every second of this story x
    March 24th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • xXLostXSoulXLoverXx

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    I loved the last chapter :) Love love loved it :)
    March 23rd, 2012 at 07:53pm
  • LittleMissRESENTMENT

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    I can't believe I only found this story today. it is amazing. I love you're writing style-you have this uncanny way of describing details/situations/people perfectly without muddying up the paragraph with unnecessary words. it was quite refreshing. I've subscribed to your Zacky story and I'm eagerly waiting on the edge of my seat to see how his story turns out. bravo to you-you are an absolutely WONDERFUl writer!!!
    March 23rd, 2012 at 06:12pm
  • helena_88

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    oh lordy i'm so sad that it's over :')
    awesome ending to an awesome story <3
    wedding.. baby girl.. seeing the old soldiers again.... *sniffs*

    oh and matt as a horse?? pmslmao!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
    March 23rd, 2012 at 01:09pm
  • CourageKeeper

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    OH MY GOD!
    I loved this so much!
    I really hate to see it end I can't wait for the epilogue(?)

    One of my favorite parts is when theyre back in the war : “You’re stuck with me now.” Brian grinned, gazing deep into her eyes.
    “Good, coz I’m not letting you go.

    SO FUCKING CUTE! I literally awwed out loud when I read that. <333
    So good.
    March 22nd, 2012 at 12:06am
  • xxTillMyLastBreathxx

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    OMG OMG OMG!!!!! I'm so sad I missed this I haven't been on in like a week but OMG I MISSED SO MUCH!!!! I'm so happy he remembered! and they are getting married awww yays!! AWESOME AS EVER!!!
    March 21st, 2012 at 04:47am
  • Lacey-Nights

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    I was a complete ball of mush whilst reading this!! Eeeeee!!!!
    March 21st, 2012 at 04:43am
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