Gunslinger - Comments

Drunk soldiers O_o ooooh man lol!! Yay!!! She saved Brian and woke up, now hopefully he wakes up... also hopefully they remember they really don't hate eachother and when she gets the flowers I hope she remembers them too!! Ooooh man can't wait for the next chapter... SOON PLEASE :D

heheh no sex for a whole week, that would make brian run fast ;)
aawe she saved him AND WOKE UP!! gosh i hope Brian wakes up too <3 can't wait to see what'll happen next <3

hahahah the windows weren't bulletproof :P they seemed to have a lot of fun though :D
aawe can't wait to see what the life-saving thing will be <3

I love this story! World history, Europe and Avenged Sevenfold, in the form of Synyster Gates, just my thing. Thank you for the wonderful tale that you are weaving. You have a flair with words. Keep up the good work.

So... I cried, especially when the man came up to Dana, but had to laugh when they were in the bakery... Makes me sad that people actually did that to people.. It's distubing! But I loved this chapter! And you my dear are an amazing writer!

i've always loved reading about ww2 back in school.. the sick shit that went down, i still can't understand the cruelness of it all... and i must say you did this chapter so well <3 really loved when the man came up to dana <3 and brian in the bakery :) lovelovelovelove <3

i've always loved reading about ww2 back in school.. the sick shit that went down, i still can't understand the cruelness of it all... and i must say you did this chapter so well <3 really loved when the man came up to dana <3 and brian in the bakery :) lovelovelovelove <3

more please!!!! :)

I really don't think I could sit here and write about this without crying... But that update was awesome lol Dana and the German woman now that was funny, and Dunn "cats in heat" hahahaha!!

Oh shoot!! GOOSEBUMPS @ the end of that chapter.. i'm probably going to cry like a baby reading the next part.......

but this update... The Camera Killer... hahah so funny!
Dunn knowing what they did in his bed.. oh gosh! hahah :P
Dana hitting that woman, was awesome.. AND you put a little Papa Roach in there, nice!!!

this story is so intriguing. and the simple fact that you haven't decided to ignore the holocaust part of WWII is so noble. Cheers to you!

OK so I have to say I spent 4 hours catching up on this story, its amazing!!!! Can't wait for you to update again its definitely a different and unique story than what I have read so far and definitely like it!!

okay seriously, i just wanna say that more ppl should read this story cos damn, it's one of the best i've read on here, the details of the war and everything! it's so amazing <3

partick and dunn.. hahaha.. he just can't stand when ppl talk back at him :P and little boy patrick did just that :D

aaaawwe paris with brian.. :D his confessions in bed was so cute!!! <3 <3 <3

lmao @ O'Shea!! poor dude, i can only imagine how much of that he actually heard ^_^
Brian, it never fails, everytime Dana is about to shower, he's there :D
and damn.. sexy time!! hahah :)
aaaawe!! *big goofy smile at the ending of the chapter*

aawe that sounds like one hell of a day!! :D glad you had a great time! ;D

hahahahah Brian.. he's so goddamn cute!! And it's so funny when he mentions Synyster Gates and everyone is sooooooooooo confused ^_^
awesome chapter, as always <3

:) I love this story just found it today and already craving more :)

Ok as for the new update... They were fighting for chocolate... That was funny... It was pretty sad that Dana had to witness a death... But like Brian said they look up to her and she has to be strong not only for them but most importantly for herself... Oh and I'm still on edge about what's going to happen to Brian... I'm like waiting for something bad to happen and then nothing... I'm shitting bricks here. I just hope he like doesn't die and the. Dana is like all sad then time passes or something and the she wakes up and he wakes up and stuff I don't know my mind is all in a loop..

I owe you two comments... I was actually busy the other day and I just read both updates today... Ok so for the first: ok so Brian and Dana are super cute I loved the part were nature called ... That was just to die for... I love how they interact even though it's not much... Well if you wouldn't have posted that it was a smut chapter I wouldn't have expected that.. That was hot!!! I also wanted to know how you came up with the battle plans I mean they are really realistic and reminds me of my days in U.S history with my hot teacher Mr. Bradshaw... Sigh.. Anyway I love it it's like I said before, Saving Private Ryan with Synister Gates!!!

I really love this story. I don't know if you ever watched "The O.C." but it reminds me of an episode of that where Ryan and Taylor end up unconscious after getting hurt and then they end up in a parallel universe. Kind of like Brian and Dana. I really am looking forward to the next update to see where you take the story. Excellent work. :)

aawe he didn't make it *sniffs* so sad ending to that chapter.. and the chocolate ''war''.. hahah :D
damn i'm so addicted to this story <3 and i'm still so amazed by all the details in it, making me picture everything that's happening in my mind :D