Gunslinger - Comments

Poor Dana she is always getting hurt but I love how worried Brian gets... Ha and I can't wait for more Freudian slips on Brian's behalf... You know you are an exceptional writer and I absolutely love all the war scenes they are super descriptive... I can't get enogh of your story I'm so glad you update often...

Aww they almost kissed bit to damn bad they were interrupted... And who would have thought Brian had it in him that was your typical Freudian slip... Oh his subconscious mind already trying to woo her... Anywho that was a great update totally love the scene it's so awesome I have no words to describe it... I how l

Woot they are being civil with each other... I liked ther interaction it was sweet and Im glad Brian is realizing that he pretty much screwed any type of relationship with Dana... Oh and omg they are on nickname terms... Who would have thought she would allow him to call her Danes when Sexy Matt Sanders was the one who came up with it and stuff... Eeek! It was good I love it and I also think you are right about on how he is going to basically grovel at her feet for forgiveness, but you know what they say true love always forgives...

Really liked the update!
I'm really happy that Dana got back safely.
I like how both Brian and Dana have started fighting less.
They are going to start having feelings for each other.
I can't wait for the next update!!!

Well I'm glad she was safely recovered and that Brian finally admitted that he was an ass to her... Maybe after this. With this new insight Dana has about her relationship with Brian things might change with them and they can start working on... well at least try to work on a new relationship... Well that was a good update I was actually holding Brian would have gone for her but I liked it this way better to he can start to feel guilty for everything he did to her.... Thank you

I just started reading this story and it's amazing!
I really like the whole thing about them going to the past.
It's really exciting and I can't wait to read more!!!

Holy shoot omg Dana is missing... Omg I wonder hOw Brian is going to take it. I mean since he doesn't know what his feelings toward her are he's probably going to think what you had mentioned befor, how he only fears losing her because besides borchard Dana is the only one who knows that they are not from that time... But I know deep down he feels for her just like she feels for him. Man I can't wait for when they admit their love for each other... This story is getting better and better... Don't keep us waiting to long... Thank you

Love it!!!its awesome and hilarious!!!...cant wait for the next update!!!

Haha poor Brian and Sargent Butler... That was good both updates were fantastic I absolutely loved them. I also loved the peep show,poor Dana... I'm glad she got an award and I'm glad Brian is starting to feel something so now he can feel all confused and maybe guilty foe how he treated her. He should know better even though he hates her he should know that you should always respect a woman even if she deserves it... Well home girl I can't wait for the next one... Thank you

That was a good update... I just loved her dream hopefully Brian gets the same one so he gets all confused... Can't wait for more the suspense is killing me ...

Wow woman that was a trip.... It felt like I was actually there... It was Saving Private Ryan with Brian Haner... Omg I hope you didnt break anything especially your fingers so you can finish this sucker up... This is really good and I cant wait for the next update. Thank you

Very original! Cant wait for more updates! Have fun ice skateing, hope your ass dont hurt to bad!!

Dude I absolutely love your story it's super original and very well written. You my friend have a great imagination to have been able to come up with this ... I can't wait for your next update...