Take a Breath - Comments

Aww poor Zach :(

I really want to know what happened to Asher!

asher frustrates me so much! but i guess the story wouldn't be as good if she wasn't a bit of a challenge, so no complaints. can't wait to read what comes next and I hope you don't have to have surgery. :(

another awesome chapter. :) i hope your hip gets better soon!

Aww Zach was probably freaking out right then. Love this story :)

this story is fucking awesome. that is all. (:

this is an excellent story! it's fast paced and addicting. ;) definitely subscribing.

I love this! it's awesome. :)

Great update!

Love This Story! and I love how she is finally opening up to him! I cannot wait to see where it goes! Update soon!

Awe :) why won't he admit feelings for her out loud?! I love it how his teammates keep razzing him about it :)

OH MY GOD, SHE'S SEMI-NORMAL? HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK. So Asher has been sane all along, she's just been trying to push him away. But she actually loves him. Aaand she isn't crazy. How in the world is this even possible?

My mind has been blown; thank you.

NOW UPDATE AGAIN. :D

I LOVED this chapter! Finally, I we get to see what goes on in that messed up head of hers :)

HE NEEDS TO GET THOSE GOALS. Jesus, don't be evil and not let him get the goals...if you do that to him, I'll cut you. >:(

I kid, I kid. But really, no joke, if he doesn't get them...xvioer;lktk;lr. Life won't matter anymore. HE NEEDS THEM.

And why yes, some chapters from Asher's POV would be quite interesting. :) See what's going on in that demented skull of hers...

As always, I'll end this with MORE FUCKING UPDATES and I LOVE YOU

Why do I feel that he might not get the four goals? I mean, I love Zach and all, but under that pressure, who knows if he'll do good or not.

Id love a few chapters in her POV. She's so mysterioussss Lol! Great update, hope you're feeling better soon!

Loveloveloved the update!

DIE DANIELLE DIE. What a friggin' hoe! Ugh, why hasn't she been hit by a Greyhound Bus yettttt. However, at least she's gone now. Forever.

...Hopefully.

IF SHE COMES BACK I'M KILLING THE BITCH I SWEAR

But I do love the updates, they made me soooo happy. So in love with this story right now, eek. It pisses me off that Asher is all messed up inside and therefore doesn't handle things like a normal person and storms off and deserts Zach whenever something goes wrong BUT Zach likes her, so...mreh. I just want them to make babies already. And for Asher to get some Prozac so she'll stop being a pyschopath.

Weeeee more updates soon, my love? :'D

Aww poor Asher! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update soon!

Ugh I hate Danielle so much right now! Seriously, who in the world would say that to a human being! I'm really hoping that Zach finds her.