Take a Breath - Comments

YAY. SHE DIDN'T RUN. I was shocked too. Maybe she'll stop being such a blockhead now...

I'm excited for updates. :D But ughhh no, why does Danielle have to come back! She's gonna scare Asher off. D: DAMN HER. Inconsiderate wench...

As far as players for one shots go, however, my favorite of all-time is and always will be Jimmy Howard of Detroit. :') However, I'm a big Kronwall fan and JESUS I LOVE JOHNNY BOYCHUK but that's all. I love them all, really. I mean...they play hockey. What's not to love?

Speaking of, I love this story and I love yooooou!

I love that Asher is finally warming up to Zach!

And I agree with Alex, your Zach's POV are awesome and well-written!

WHY DOESN'T THIS HAVE ANY COMMENTS

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I LOVE THIS STORY

I'm done, lol. I'll be normal now. I really do adore this story. Zach's POV is great, especially because you write it like a man would think - straightforward, simple, not all emotional like a female (and how girls usually write guys' POVs as). Most of the time, when a chick writes as a guy, they get it all wrong. But you doin' it right, girl. Booyah.

Asher is severely fucked up and I hate her. Just so you know. lol what a psychopath BUT I kinda have to like her 'cuz Zach does, but stillllll what in the hell is wrong with your head dude Asher c'mon stop being such a dillhooooole

BUT WHEN SHE FELL ASLEEP ON HIM IN THE LAST CHAPTER IT WAS SO CUTE I THOUGHT I WOULD DIE

I'm very tired so I have a feeling what I just typed wasn't informational at all, but on the contrare I have just subscribed and will be your biggest fan from here on out. Can you say comments for every chapter? Cuz here I cooooome!

ov08i3j4mrkn my name is Alex. Just useful information since I'm your newest number one fan.

I'M EXCITED FOR MORE UPDATES. UPDATE SOOOOON PLEAAAASE

bye kiddo <3

I really liked this chapter, its hard to like Asher when she's so friggen' cold towards Zack! Love it nonetheless!!

Aww, sad chapter but it was cute how protective Zach got.

I'm so happy that I found this story! It's awesome! Please update soon!

Ooh, things are not looking good for Zach and Danielle. I'm really looking forward to learning more about Asher's past =D

I was going through stories and saw this was a Parise story. I look to see if its yours and sure enough it it :) I'm glad I finally caught on that you've already started your new story!

Keep it up, babes <3

She obviously has a lot of baggage. Already got me hooked :)

I liked this so far. I'm sure it'll be as awesome as your other stories :)

Can't wait for an update!