Homophobe - Comments

Haha, okay, I'm paying attention. I promise. :)

I really wanna see where this goes when Chase is drunk... because... well because it's sure to stir things in an interesting direction haha. :)

MMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I'm excited for drunk Chase!!! EEPP!!! I can't wait for the next update. If he's even half as gay as he was the last time he's drunk it'll be awesome, drunk Chase makes my day. hahaha. But then....I kinda like Mason :O...my brain hurts....gah. Anyways...I make your week? hehe...I feel amazing now, soo loved.
Ahh but okay so back onto the story...I can't decide whether Ash looks straight or gay..like..he wears girly sweaters apparently, and I think you said he wears beanies, but does he talk with that awkward gay voice. I can't even say girl voice cause I've never met a girl that talks like a stereotypical gay guy. (My friend calls it gay pitch) And it kinda aggrevates me when guys are like that cause i'm just like..come on...you're still a guy! But at the same time on some guys it's kinda cute soo..bleh...conflicting thoughts.
And Chase...Chase aggrevates me too. If he wasn't in the picture then Ash would be confident about his sexuality and probably gettin' down with Mason already but at the same time....I would be so sad if he wasn't in the story. Just...meh...he seems like kinda a douche...I think I'm repeating myself from the last comment I left but I'm gonna keep it like that lol.
Anyways...NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE :D I really can't wait to read it............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................That is me waiting..because you are making me wait for a drunk Chase.
Peace.

this story's intense :o

Lol
Chase would come on to the first thing he see's, I mean he did that to Ash :P almost
&& I bet his father is gay which is another reason why he hates gays
IDK
just a guess
update soon plz

Hehe Ash and his girly ass sweaters. That made my night.

Haha That was Awesome Awesome Awesome sauce. I'm really mad Chase didn't even remember what happened while he was drunk. I was like you fucking dipshit oh no you didn't! But then I was like...meh...I suppose it's for the better. Asher is sooo cute I just wanna take him and wrap him up in a big hug.
When he was talking about being James Bond I laughed so hard because Sometimes I feel like that too and my friends are just like...Sam...what the hell are you doing and I'll look at them like O.O you can't fucking see me. I'm freaking James Bond! But of course they always can. Anyways he's really cute and I can't decide whether I want Chase to realize he's totally in love with him or for him to get together with Mason who is also a ten on my cute-o-meter.
And then oh my god, you are a butt for doing that to me in the begining of the sixth chapter! I really thought he was like..about to get raped or something by sweet Mason cause of all the stuff that was happening and I was like noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo not Asher! But then he said Iguana and I started dying. I was just like damn I'm an idiot hahaha.
Ah Mason was sooo cute the way he got down on one knee for him to ask if he could draw him. I was like dudee....next time I ask someone I'm totally doing that! And then of course when he told him he'd make him look hot I was just like meh, you're supposed to say something like oh sorry if I can't make my drawing as hot as you or something. Not tell them that it's gonna look better than them.
Oh gosh and then at the very end when he was like, wanna know the real reason why Chase hates me? I was like HHEELLLL YYEESSS! haha and then when he said "I kissed him" I was done. Just done. I was not expecting that AT ALL. but for some reason it made me estatic. I was doing my little happy dance in my kitchen just liike ooohhhh yeahhhhhhhhh.
One for Mason having the balls to do that.
And two for Chase having kissed a guy (and probably liking it).
I can't wait for the next chapter :D
Peace

lol. I figured it out. XD
I swear I love Mason and Ash more and more each day. This story too! So update soon!

Can I just say I blame you for how tired I'm gonna be in the morning after staying up all night reading these chapters! Damn you! (but in I nice way)
The whole iguana part was fucking brill! Mason and his bromance with Albert.
And the part where Ash was anticipating to touch Albert? Sooooo many dirty thoughts.
But again, screw you for making that damned clffhanger! I.WANT.MORE

How dare you!! you've drawn me in and then.. ughhhh!! cliff hanger! DX

Hahaha, but that was perfect really. I love it. I had a great sense of who the characters were pretty quickly and I love it. I think it's a great story and I can't wait for more... though it's probably slightly greedy... oh well :) haha. Lovely :)

Team....Iguana!!!
LMAO xD
I still havent decided yet :P
My first reaction to the begining of the story was 'OMG, they're alredy doing it!'
then I laughed when it was the iguana.....
I REALLY enjoy this story :P update!!!!

That was a wonderful surprise!

Mason kissing Chase.

I can't wait to see Ash's reaction to that one.

Please update soon!

So I don't know why but I always root for anyone except for the main love interest in stories where the straight guy/best friend seems to be the focus. So TEAM MASON GO!

yeah, I think I should re-check my stories >.<

I'm loving this so much, write more, write more!

AAAHHHHHHHHH, so I lied on your profile, it was 3 updates!! I'm so mad I waited this long >.< I was all sad, and mopey, thinking you still hadn't updated but no! Urgle. Damn my computer for not warning me even though I've subscribed!
Anyways, I love his friend! Layla i think? She's soo fucking funny, and I love the fact that she just flat out hates Chase. No offense to you but I think he would be the type of person in my school whom i would hate too, just so arrogant and douche-like. haha though i'm pretty sure that's the feeling you were trying to convey, Am I right?
Oh and Mason is fucking awesome! I love how when Layla left he was just like, "Heh, figuers." Laugh laugh. I was dying! I was like yeah, you go man! And he seems like he's so chill, the way he just offered to pay for...holy shit I'm totally blanking on the main characters..oh right Ash >.< hehe my bad, anyways, the way he offered to pay for Ash's food, like it was no big deal. So cute. I had a total fangirl moment when he was like
"It's no big deal just order."
Haha I was just like 'Squeeee!!' , And i knew you were going to ruin it for them, it was just too perfect a moment!
When Chase walked in I was just like *smolder smolder* grrrrr. WHY WOULD YOU RUIN THE PERFECT MOMENT?! Gah! And then when he was arguing and ingoring Ash I was like..you ass! haha
Oh my god, and when Ash was just like, So i hauled my ass out of there or something, I laughed so hard I nearly pissed my pants, he was all like 'I need to do more cardio' ahahahahhahaahahahahahahahahahaha. You kill me man. :D
I was at the part where Ash let drunk Chase in and I was so into the story that when my mom tapped my shoulder i was like "AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH Rape!"
But Oh my god, i could totally see Chase being the closet self-hating homosexual. Those douchebags are everywhere O.o aha. Anyways when they almost kissed I just about died, that was amazing and then he had to ruin the moment by puking. Goddammit, Ash just can't catch a break, I feel so bad for the poor kid!
His best friend is a homophobe, his other best friend sets him up on blind and awkward (at first) dates and Mason probably thinks he's a douche too now :(
So, that's basically what I thought of the last three chapters lmao. If you got this far than Kudos to you! I commend you for reading my long ass comment and think you are really spiffy ^.^
By the way, your writing style is awesome.
Okay I'm don't now I swear.
Bye.

I missed two chapters -.- Sorry for not commenting on the last one.
Besides that, I think something is a bit off about Mason. I don't know, there's just something not quite right about him. And ooooh. Was Chase going to kiss Ash :O But he puked yuck.
Update soon?

I really like this!! Keep updating puh-lease :)

I really like this!! Keep updating puh-lease :)

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMFG
xDDDDDD
Chase why did you stop!!!
Ash should totally hang with Mason to get Chase jealouse ;PPP
Update Update Update
please please XDDDDDD

wow the tension between Chase and Mason O.o
lol xD
I was eating a gronola bar too xDDDD
update please
I'm loving this story more and more :3