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I love this already. I've just read the first chapter so far but I'm loving it. This Ash character is just very lovable. And I just love the introduction scene about how Ash was fantasizing about Chase. It's funny and so realistic. Teenage boys are always known for their raging hormones and this little scene right here just shows it perfectly.

I'm not sure what I'm rambling right now. But all I know is I am definitely subscribing. ~(^_^)~

I love this story so much, but I need to know what happens! Please! ♡

First of all, yes I do like when you mention names. It makes me a feel special lol and second....Dudeeeeee you don't even understand how exstactic I am that you have this amazing update. I mean its a bout gosh darn time he amitted he liked Ash! :) can not wait for the next update like seriously! :) great job!

SO MANY FEELS. I CAN'T HANDLE IT. OMG WHAT, JFKDJFKLSJFKSLJFSKJFSKLFJKKJHFGDK.

I don't think I have ever commented on this story before even though I've been following it since the dawn of time, but god. I just finished rereading the entire thing, and fjerkjfkldhjglkfhjdklg. I don't even know where to start, well actually I do but, that's besides the point. I was just trying to make this comment more dramatic, like Chase's confession. >.<

Anyway... YOU. ARE. SUCH. AN. AMAZING. WRITER. I can't even begin to tell you why, cause everything is just so person. Everything just flows so naturally and your probably one of the few if not only, since none are coming to mind, writers that actually makes me laugh out loud on mibba. I love the way you just describe everything in a corky kind of way to suit Ash's personality, and it all goes so well, and uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Words can not example my feelings.

And Mason, at the beginning of this story, I must admit. I was totally team Mason, and I still sort of am, but not with Ash, I just adore the guy in general. His fucking pet iguana Albert and him is probably the cutest thing ever (well besides the the most recent chapter). He's so funny, and happy go lucky, and I just love how he makes Ash happy, but in recent chapters I'm getting all emotional over him. He's so still in love with that guy in his sketch book and he's trying to forget about him with Ash isn't he! Oh my god, Mason come herez, I shall hug you to death until all your bad feelings are gone. Oh my god, I'm getting so worked up over a side character. /Dead.

Speaking of side characters, Layla, is a badass. I think that statement speaks for it self.

The last few chapters have been so heart-wrenching, are you trying to kill me women!?! COME ON. SERIOUSLY.
Ash being all depressed without Chase by his side and Chase being all depressed with out Ash by his side, and that chapter when they were at the party, and there arguments, SO MUCH PASSION. /COMES BACK TO LIFE TO DIES AGAIN. But this most recent, chapter, where they finally kissed and then finding out about Chase's gay dad (which I would like to point out I totally predicted it, but I'm not bragging or anything, well maybe a little). Chase's confession was probably the cutest thing I have ever read. CHASE WHY ARE YOU SO CUTE, COME HERE, LET ME HUG YOU. I PROMISE I SHALL WIPE ALL THE MASON GERMS OFF TO ME BECAUSE I HUGGED HIM EARLIER.

OH MY GOD. THEY KISSED, THEY KISSED. AND HE WAS SOBER. AND I AM PROBABLY NOT MAKING ANY SENSE RIGHT NOW CAUSE IT'S REALLY REALLY LATE AND I STAYED UP READING THIS WHICH ISN'T THE BEST IDEA IN THE WORLD AND OMG, I DON'T WANT TO MAKE THIS COMMENT ANY LONGER THEN IT ALREADY IS. -deep breath-

This story is simply breathtaking, and you are an amazing author. I will be greatly anticipating the next update.

I have been waiting for you to updat eand when you finally did I was so happy. The story is moving along pretty well and I think it's starting to get the "end is coming soon" feel to it. Anyway thank you for updataing and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Holy shit omg omg omg!!!! I can't believe it I just reread the entire story its been so long since the update and then this chapter was like the best thing ever. so excited when I saw that you had updated and now I can't wait until the next one!!! Gah this story is so good!

WAIT WTF I THOUGHT I HAD A SOLID TWO MORE CHAPTERS AND THEN NOPE IT JUST NO MORE TO READDDDDDDDDD.

I don't like first person stories, I really don't. I can never get into them. But then this mother effing story came and I just LOST MY INHIBITIONS I LOVE IT SO MUCH OKAY.

Mason gasped. “Now don’t even joke about that, Ash, that’s just cruel. All I’m asking for you is just to gently suck my dick.” fav line ever to be faved

I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF.

So congratulations this is like my fav story on Mibba

AND I'M NOT GOING TO LIE I THOUGHT THAT LIKE Ash was going to gently suck Mason's dick and then for some goddamned reason freaking CHASE WAS GOING TO WALK IN AND BLOW THE FUCK UP LIKE I WAS WAITING FOR IT.

Anyway yeah I just really like this fic. i want 2 lick it

This is definitely my new favourite story. Seriously, I can't even put into words how attached I am right now. And to drop that bombshell? Ack!!! This is definitely one Hell of an emotional roller coaster but I'm happy to go along for the ride. XD

I'm glad Chase finally kissed Ash sober :D
Thanks for updating <3
More soon please!

I'M DEAD. THAT WAS AN AWESOME UPDATE. AGHHHH!<3

STAHP YOUCANT DO THIS TO MEEEE

hisudhafishdf this story. I just can't not read it

yes, keep doing your thing, i love this! <3

Oh my God zsexrdctfgvybhjnkm nvyvubhjnklml okay you go ahead and do that. go ahead and mess with my feelings that's okay

ughhhh please update soon this is killing me

That chapter was absolutely lovely. (: I loved everything about it. Even though I love Mason and Ash together, Chase and Ash is just so perfect.

I'm fangurling.
Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I JUST FAINTED TWICE FROM READING THAT CONFESSION AND KISSING SCENE! AND I HAD TO RE READ IT AGAIN AND I FAINTED LOL I LOVEEEEEEE YOU OH MY GOD THIS MADE MY NIGHT <3 IMMA DIE LET ME FAN MYSELF!!! *Fans Self* THIS IS SOOO AMAZING <3!!!!

Gah how so you make me consider Chase when Mason is just so perfect. >.<

WHAT KIND OF BLACK MAGIC ARE YOU USING TO MAKE ME FEEL LIKE THIS!?

HOLYSHITTINGMALTBALLS. OHHHHHHMYGOSH. OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH. CHASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. I LOVE YOU. GOD, I LOVE HIM. THAT WAS PROBABLY THE CUTEST THING I HAVE EVER READ OMG I CAN'T BREATH. I NEED MY ASTHMA PUMP. OH GOD.

This just made my holidays THAT MUCH BETTER. It's the last day in my holidays, and my god, I don't even care that I have to go to school tomorrow because you made my life with this update.
CHASE KISSED HIM. SOBER. MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED. You are probably the awesomest person on the face of the earth because of this. This is too much for me to handle, I'm sorry, you probably gave up reading this because this is just a big slab of my feelings. OH GOD. ASH, CHASE, I LOVE YOU.


I love this story.