i don't care about Mason, i'm sorry to say. i love chase and ash because of how awkward it has been and the tension you built with the characters. finally the inevitable release.... no pun intended.... i love this story so keep up the great work in the final chapters.
This story... I'm really trying to put it into words how it makes me feel. Seriously, I am so full of emotions from all the characters!
You're an amazing author. This beautiful piece of art is just perfect. You make it so believable. Ash and Chase are real life bestfriends and it's not all crazy angsty bullshit.
I'm really trying to tell you how much I love this and how I JUST discovered it and read it in less than 24 hours and I don't even know what chapter this is because I'm so caught up in this story. It's just soooo beautiful! I just want to cry in happiness right now.
I know I said I will continue reading tomorrow but I just can't stop. You, my dear great author had me hooked on this story. ~(^_^)~
As I read chapter 19, I realized why I dislike Mason. It's because he really reminded me of myself. When I first read this story, I thought I was in Ash's shoes because falling in love with the best friend and stuff. But no... actually I was more related to Mason. Because the friend that I'm in love with, is actually in love with someone else who happen to be my other best friend who's been his best friend longer than I do. I guess I understand the feeling of being the third wheel. T.T Oh, Mason! I feel for you. The difference being the one he likes isn't an asshole. But still...
However, you do have me curious about that boy in Mason's sketch book. Is that the straight boy that Mason's in love with? Oh... poor boy!
And by the end of chapter 20, I was all teary-eyed. Damn! At first you made me laugh, then you made me cry? My heart goes out to these poor boys. Yeah, Chase was an asshole but... he's human. He has flaws. Don't fuck this up again, Chase! As for Mason, you're an amazing guy, you can find someone who will suit you perfectly. Ash... I hope you'll find your happiness.
And you, my dear author, I hope you update soon. ~(^_^)~
And yes, that's the end of my comment outburst and I'll be here waiting for the next chapter.
I just read chapter 12 and I had to stop myself from reading any further. This story is gonna kill every sensible thoughts in my brain. Damn! Chase, what are you thinking, man? Awww... Ash! Damn! Damn! Damn!
I'll probably come back later to read the rest of the story. For now I just have to separate myself and get back to reality. I have the tendency to be too attached once I'm in love with a story that I just feel like I was a part of the story. So... yeah, I'll probably be back tomorrow for more. ~(^_^)~
I just finished chapter 11 and... awww... I just... awww... you have a knack on making people laugh, you know that? I am quite a picky reader. I don't usually laugh on stories that the authors thought funny but this... this is just simply amazing! And I don't usually comment a lot either unless I feel really strongly about the story. And again, I must say you did a really amazing job with this story that manage to squeeze not only one comment from me but I've been spamming this story comments. Hahaha... and I can assure you that this will NOT be my last comment.
Even though Chase is an asshole and all and Mason just so cute and so great with kids (I've always have a weakness for guys that are good with children). But I don't know why I'm just more leaning towards Chase. There's just something about him. And there's something about Mason that I just feel... erm... there's something about him. I just can't pin-point it yet and I hope by reading the next chapters, I'll get it. ~(^_^)~
I just can't stop reading! I'm on chapter 7 right now and I just can't wait to read more, more, more and MORE!
Oh my God! Just as I thought, Ash is so ADORABLE! And I love how you make every character has their flaws. Like, even though Ash loves Chase but he still can see the flaws and still love him nonetheless. Most stories annoy me because the characters are always so perfectly good or amazing. But this Chase guy is a total asshole. I would love to hate him but I can't because I can actually feel how much Ash loves him. Falling for a best friend sucks. I know because I've been there.
Oh, I'm gonna shut up now and just continue reading. ~(^_^)~
I love this already. I've just read the first chapter so far but I'm loving it. This Ash character is just very lovable. And I just love the introduction scene about how Ash was fantasizing about Chase. It's funny and so realistic. Teenage boys are always known for their raging hormones and this little scene right here just shows it perfectly.
I'm not sure what I'm rambling right now. But all I know is I am definitely subscribing. ~(^_^)~
I love this already. I've just read the first chapter so far but I'm loving it. This Ash character is just very lovable. And I just love the introduction scene about how Ash was fantasizing about Chase. It's funny and so realistic. Teenage boys are always known for their raging hormones and this little scene right here just shows it perfectly.
I'm not sure what I'm rambling right now. But all I know is I am definitely subscribing. ~(^_^)~