Deserving Ellie - Comments

  • lex;

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    Yes!!! That was perfect omg
    August 23rd, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • wintersgirl1608

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    To say I am happy with this outcome would be an understatement. I LOVED IT!!! I've been on Kris 's side since you started with Just One Time. Can't wait to see what you have in store for them.
    August 23rd, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • LovestoRead

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    THANK THE LORD SHE STAYED WITH KRIS!!!!!!
    August 23rd, 2012 at 09:39pm
  • missann10

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    So happy with the ending I always wanted her with Kris!!! Love the update and can't wait for the last chapter even though I am sad to see this story ending!
    August 23rd, 2012 at 08:25pm
  • Cali's Mommy

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    Am I happy??? Hmmmm....well, let's see.....I have been team KRIS since the beginning, so I would say a big HELL YEAH I'M HAPPY! :) I didn't comment on the last chapter, sorry about that, I didn't get a chance to comment right after I read it, but I KNEW you wouldn't have put her with Avery as anything more than a friend. I'm so happy that everything worked out with her and Kris! I know there's still an epilogue left, but unless you do something drastic like send her back to Jordan, then I got my happy ending! Of course I will still be reading and commenting on the last chapter. I hope you have something happy in store for Jordan in there, because I do feel bad for him. Even though he didn't belong with Ellie doesn't mean he shouldn't be happy. Can't wait to see what you have in store for him! GREAT UPDATE!!! :D
    August 23rd, 2012 at 06:58pm
  • punkrockromance

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    I am not disappointed in the least with the ending of this story!! I am so glad she ended up with Kristopher. I wasn't kidding when I said this is my favorite story right now, I'm glad they are finally together but I'm going to be so sad to see it go. Can't wait to see what you do next!
    August 23rd, 2012 at 06:56pm
  • Bugalouie

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    OMFG Team Kris! yay! I am 100% totally happy with the outcome!
    August 23rd, 2012 at 06:33pm
  • pesky-canes

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    Totally didn't see it coming but I like it!
    August 22nd, 2012 at 03:56am
  • kendra-rae

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    NOOO! not Sean Avery! haha Love it <3 cannot wait for more :)
    August 22nd, 2012 at 03:04am
  • dreamerforever

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    *utters curse words* Yuck. Sean Avery.
    August 21st, 2012 at 09:22pm
  • stephanieannc

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    omg this is amazing! it's my favorite story on here!
    August 21st, 2012 at 04:56am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    Well that was really unexpected, I hope Ellie isn't really with Avery. I hope Kris ends up with her (even though I'm team Jordan).

    Awesome update! :)
    August 21st, 2012 at 04:45am
  • caitlinstarz

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    Really hope she's not with Avery and officially gets with kris
    August 21st, 2012 at 04:02am
  • bdonahue

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    Okkk she canNOT end up with Avery!!! He is terrible and Kris is so sweet! Hope she isn't for real with Avery and ends up with Kris. Can't wait for the next chapter...love your stories!
    August 21st, 2012 at 02:19am
  • icequeen0327

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    Sooo, I was rooting for Jordan until this chapter and after Kris' POV, feel bad for the guy! Really hoping Ellie is not shacking up with Avery, that's just ughh on so many levels!
    August 21st, 2012 at 01:07am
  • headintheclouds

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    I love that Kris is trying so hard to get her back. I'll bet that Ellie is pretty shocked that he is looking for her. I don't think there is anything between Ellie and Avery, but that won't stop Avery from putting the thought into Kris' head. :(

    Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
    August 21st, 2012 at 01:07am
  • Caarool

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    I was sooooo happy when I saw the update. Team Kris since the beginning of this story... Praying that she and Avery are NOT together!!! I'm already wating for another update SOON! PLEASE, PLEASE!!
    August 21st, 2012 at 12:50am
  • wintersgirl1608

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    Team Kris all the way!!! I've become so invested in your story that my heart jumped when I saw the update. I'm hoping that Avery and Ellie aren't really together and that somehow Kris will get the girl in the end. I knew that it wouldn't be easy for anyone involved. Can't wait for more!
    August 21st, 2012 at 12:39am
  • xoxabs88xox

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    I get knots in my stomach whenever I read one of your updates (I mean that as a complete compliment; it shows I'm emotionally attached to your characters).

    I hope Avery is just messing with Kris and making him think he and Ellie are together to make up for the hard time Ellie's had because of Kris's idiocy with that blonde
    August 21st, 2012 at 12:10am
  • ktizzle1010

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    Noooooo!!! She needs to be with Kris and we need another update soon!!!
    August 20th, 2012 at 11:13pm