Deserving Ellie - Comments

I love this story, really sad it's over because this is an update that I always look forward too!! Looking forward to your Sid and James story and would love to hear more from Ellie and Kris..!

I would totally read the sequel. I agree with @Bublbabie Jordan needs someone to take care of him. I love your style of writing and you have one of the best series I have read. Ever.

i would read the sequel. I hope you get Jordan another girl in Carolina so he can be happy too. I like how you ended it with Kris and Ellie. They just made a better match in my opinion. I didn't really understand the bracelet thing though.

I just finished reading this and just damn! I loved it, it was hot, sexy, romantic, everything. I was Team Tanger all the way, Jordan's a good guy but I'm a Tanger girl If there's a sequel, I'd love to read it. I understand about being busy, I start a new job next week so I'm going to be busy too. Keep up the good work

Love it!

I cannot believe that this story is over. I'm so glad that she's with Kris. They just seem to work so good together. I love the bracelets. Amazing story. You did a beautiful job on it!

Looking forward to your next story.

Yay! Love it and cannot wait for more <3

I'm sorry that I haven't commented in a long time. Life has been so crazy and I barely have five minutes to myself. I was so disappointed when she slept with Jordan. He's just such a prick and doesn't appreciate what he has in her and you just know he's going to turn around and mess it all up. He says he loves her, but I truly believe he doesn't know what real love is. He's just a spoiled little boy that thinks he should have everything handed to him on a silver platter. And I was so disappointed in Ellie. What she had with Kris was the real deal. The sex was awesome and he adored her and treated her like a Queen. Who wouldn't want that?

I thought she kind of deserved being treated that way by the other WAGs. First with Kris, then with Jordan. Those bitches are very judgemental, I imagine.

The banter in the locker room was awesome. 'bumping uglies with Staal' hahahahaha I love that saying. And Cookie stirring the pot a little bit and encouraging Kris to go and get laid. Bad Cookie. And bad Kris for listening to him!

I had second hand embarrassment when that blond answered the door. And I was so sad and furious that she never gave him the note! That cow!

Glad Kris punched that whore Jordan square in the face. I don't care if he'd already lost Ellie or not and we didn't know about it, but he still deserved it for all the shitty things he'd done and the way he treated people.

That Addison...a little bit of a flighty tramp, non? Glad he didn't fall for it and I'm glad that he finally found in (in a way) where Ellie is.

Marc and his 'deal'. Glad the Penguins won. Not glad that she's with Sean Avery! You know how I feel about that guy. How could you torture me like this?

Oh thank the Lord...they're not together. Whew. Huge sigh of relief.

The conversation in the cafe was incredible. Love the mixture of the initial panic when he pulled his hand away to the relief that he's not going to walk away from her and that he truly does love her. And I thought her confession of being in love with him was wonderfully written.

The sex is incredible. As usual. How can it not be with him? lol

Looking forward to the epilogue. <3

I'm so relieved. She's back with Kris, where she belongs.

I'm so happy she ended up with Kris. That being said I can't believe he thought that she wouldn't have sex with Jordan. He knows Ellie loves sex, they had been having friends with benefits sex even when she thought she loved Jordan. Of course she's going to sleep with the man she thinks she loves. I wish he could have been as understanding as she was but, I guess the cleansing wouldn't have been necessary then ... so I get it!
Looking forward to the Epilogue!
Can't wait to see what you do with Sid. I would be willing to bribe you to make him a sex addict, manwhore super kinky or pick something else fun! Let me know what the price is! ;-)

You did an amazing job with this story! I thought the ending was perfect :)
Can't wait to read the Epilogue!

I loved this whole story! I kind of wish she ended up with Jordan but you can't deny Kris and Ellie's connection!

Ended the exact way I wanted it to :D
Can't wait for the Epilogue...

So so happy she's with kris, such an amazing chapter!

I am kind of glad she ended up with Kris

Love, love, love this story. I am sad it's over...can't wait for epiloge

NOOO I don't regret her ended up with Kris. I mean sure, I was a Jordan team all the way but when you put it into a twist, OH MAN it made the story even better!!!!!!!!! Tanger was too sweet it gave me toothache lol! You should start another story about him too *winkwinkwink* :DDDD I've been a fan of your stories, I think you're a perfect writer! All of your stories are badass and highgrade reccommended LOL :):):) (shoot, love the smutty stuff lol)

YES!!!!!!!!!!! I am sooo loving this ending!!!!

Loved the ending! It was perfect for them! Can't wait to read your new Sid story!!!

I liked how Kris was washing away anything to do with Jordan on her. So glad that she told him about the note that he didn't get because of some random girl thought she had a chance with him. Great work! Can't wait to see what happens in the epilogue!