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ohhh his forever! i hope she is! thanks for updating!!

I loved it. Something about the words you chose and the way they flowed together. It was beautiful. Sad but beautiful. I like that his twin was in here too. Sometimes I forget that he even has one. I really hope he doesn't move on though. If he only knew she shared his feelings. Oh it's so tragic. I think they'll work it out though. Can't wait for the next one. Excellent work dear. Have fun on spring break!

Oh and please don't apologize for making the story sad! I mean, it hurts to think of the characters we have come to love hurting but if this story was all happy-go-lucky, why even read it. There is no story there! I'm glad you're making it realistic. You don't have to explain yourself to us. I hope I'm not coming off as pushy here. Sorry if I am. Also, kind of hoping for some more Lily/Ryan looooveeee soon. Lol :)

She is killing the poor boy! She's evil! Well, it's easy to judge her when most of the chapter was in Gabriel's POV. I empathize with her, I really do. I understand her fears but still, she's hurting him so badly. It just seems cruel to do this to Gabe and to herself. I hope she comes to her senses soon. I loved that he came to win her back and I loved how her family tried to comfort him. I thought that was very sweet. I also loved the analogy about romantic movies and fighting against time. Wonderfully written as usual.. I can't wait for the next one!

THANK GOD YOU UPDATE SO FREQUENTLY. Theres some stories that update once every 2 months and then I like die because I freak out over what's gonna hapen.
But WHY do you insist on making this so sad... UGH I'm like Ridiculously sad for Gabe...

i'm so sad :( I love them as a couple and I'm sad that he is mad at Ryan. How could anyone be mad a Ryan :( please update again soon!!!!!

It's really amazing you update this almost every day and it's still so GOOD! Keep going!!

Alright so basically the end of this chapter was like perfection. That she is more important to him than hockey, even after he spent so much time in this chapter thinking about how hockey was his passion and kept him sane. He loves her so much. I hope she realizes that. But I also wish he would realize that maybe she really does need time alone to figure herself and her life out. But then again, who says she really has to be alone to do that. I don't even know. I loved the update and I can't wait for more! I feel bad for Ryan. And I think Lily is amazing! That is all. Lol.

i've only read the first chapter of this story...but i'm so excited to read on! landeskog doesn't get much love on here and this is probably the first story about him that actually looks like a good read. (:

What a bitch move! To tell him that you love him like that, right as you're saying goodbye forever. If she had never said that, it would probably be easier on him later. Cowardly, gutless. But still, I feel for her. I could never be a WAG. I definitely wouldn't be able to handle it and if I was going to put myself in that situation then he'd have to be a really fucking spectacular guy and we'd have to be so in love. Which is what they have there. I think it'd be worth it. But she is right. She has a lot of issues that she really needs to work out before she can fully give herself to someone. It's not fair to him but neither is walking away. I don't really think there is right option in this situation. She has to do whats best for her but...well, I give up trying to articulate my feelings about this. It's some intense, romantic, real shit. Please update soon?

uuuuuugggggggghhhhhh i have absolutely no clue what is going to happen right now and i dont know if i like that....as usual though this chapter was awesome even if it makes me want to lock them in a room for the rest of their lives so they have to be together...please please please update!!

NOOOOO WHY WHY WHY LIKE I'M ACTUALLY SO SAD RIGHT NOW AND NOT MANY THINGS MAKE ME SAD. GABE'S GONNA GET DEPRESSED AND DO STUPID STUFF CAUSE SOME PUCK BUNNIES WERE BEING REATRDED WHY WHY WHYWHYWHYWHY AHH I'M SO DISTRAUGHT OVER THIS AND IDEK WHY .... kay I'm done

That last sentence man. It definitely means so much more than her time in Colorado is coming to an end. She definitely has put an expiration date on their relationship. And that just makes things so much harder. I'm dying to know what she did that was so bad that she thinks that Gabe will leave her. She obviously believes that he loves her or she wouldn't be there. It must be awful. But moving on, the imagery in this chapter was just beautiful. I wanna go see some mountains now! I'm dying in anticipation of the next update!

That last sentence man. It definitely means so much more than her time in Colorado is coming to an end. She definitely has put an expiration date on their relationship. And that just makes things so much harder. I'm dying to know what she did that was so bad that she thinks that Gabe will leave her. She obviously believes that he loves her or she wouldn't be there. It must be awful. But moving on, the imagery in this chapter was just beautiful. I wanna go see some mountains now! I'm dying in anticipation of the next update!

Uhmmm if she gets pregnant she'll leave Gabe for sure. and I don't want that to happen :S i spent my whole day reading this story xD NEVER END IT

The thought of pregnancy came into my mind also...I guess I'll just have to wait and see! I hope she lets her wall down and just tells him she loves him and that she wants to spend the rest of her life with him! Haha I don't really see that happening though:)

Please, please, please don't let them get pregnant! She is obviously very fragile emotionally and that just won't be good for anyone, especially a baby! This chapter was pretty sad, to be honest. I never really thought that Gabe, in real life, might have to deal with some of those pressures. And the Crosby part made me want to cry too. I just want that kid to fall hopelessly in love with a girl that falls back just as hard. Anyway, excellent chapter! You've got me dying to know about her mysterious past. Can't wait for the next update!

How does this story not have more comments! My mind is blown?!

Oh my gosh! I also forgot to mention how much I love the Ryan O'Reilly (first and last name always required; irish accent as well) and Lily storyline. It's fantastic!

I love it! I feel like a lot of the stories I read on here have the same sort of vibe but this story is different. In a VERY good way. It's easily become one of my favorite. Please update soon?!