What We Left Unsaid - Comments

  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Awesom as always
    Awwwwww I hope Ava gets to Zacky ok and doesn't run into drake. Matt did over react by what was he meant to do? I guess he could have talked to her about it before but he was trying to protect everyone which looking at it isn't easy. I can't wait for more. Update soon :)
    November 10th, 2013 at 12:04pm
  • abnurmel

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    buahahahaha! I knew it!
    Also I hope she is going to be okay and so is Zacky!
    November 10th, 2013 at 10:19am
  • zackystheman4me

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    Holy shit... I had to catch up and boy did I miss a lot. I can't believe this is happening right now. Wow I didn't think Brian was one of the guys watching that go down and it's weird Zacky didn't realize Brian was in the room when that was happening but I'm so glad everything is out and the open. I hope Ava can save Zacky and he's alright and my vote is for the squeal because I have to know how this ends. Loved the update and I can't wait for the last one...
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:52am
  • Golden

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    Omg wow. To be honest, i know he didn't know the full story but i don't blame matt for being a complete jerk to her. I know when zacky was telling that story, i was getting upset myself. It sounded horrible for him.

    But i can't wait for the next chapter and i seriously can't wait for the sequel.
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:10am
  • Bunny-on-Drugs

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    I knew matt was being an asshat and overreacting, I hope he regrets that mistake for the rest of his life!! I don't blame zacky because he was tortured and hes to damn stubborn but matt should have known better. i wish she wouldn't ever forgive him and would leave the pack but she wont because shes better than them!
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • LeahVengeance

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    Ooih thanks god that everything is clearing out. I was really upset thinking about the possibility that Ava actually did that. I can breath. I'll be waiting for a sequel and i hope for it to be out soon!
    November 10th, 2013 at 06:35am
  • LeahVengeance

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    Ooih thanks god that everything is clearing out. I was really upset thinking about the possibility that Ava actually did that. I can breath. I'll be waiting for a sequel and i hope for it to be out soon!
    November 10th, 2013 at 06:35am
  • Ailurophile

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    I KNEW IT! I FUCKING KNEW IT! TEAM AVA YEAH!!

    I wonder how it's gonna go down with Ava and Drake! eeekkk!!! Okay, I'm calm now....there were too many emotions going through me for a moment there lol
    November 10th, 2013 at 05:20am
  • Alesha.

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    I LOVE IT! :D
    November 10th, 2013 at 05:06am
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    Holy fuckin shit batman. That was intense and so fuckin clarifying. This changes everything. I hope Ava beats drake at his own game. Oh my shit I can't wait for the next update. Wellfuckindone! :) this is still one of the BEST stories I've ever read.
    November 10th, 2013 at 04:59am
  • tipy

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    Dang you weren't lying about not having to wait long lol but that was ab awesome reveal to that story, and I'm glad there will be a sequel!
    November 10th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Wow it all unfold crazy can not wait for the sequel and the prequel
    November 10th, 2013 at 04:31am
  • mforaker

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    Oh I hope Zacky is okay!! He really needs to tell everyone what happened in the past, that way thay would understand why he is the way he is. At least get Brian off his back.

    I still don't know about Ava..I guess I'll have to wait until the mystery about the woman and papers is revealed to honestly have an opinion on that.

    Why on earth was Zacky out on his own?? He was doing something but what?

    I see what you mean about Matt being pressured trying to protect everyone..poor guy.

    Well my vote is for the sequel just because Zacky is my favorite!!
    You are an amazing writer! I literally did a happy dance when I saw that you had updated. Thanks for taking the time to put it up!!

    Can't wait for more!!!!!
    November 10th, 2013 at 03:09am
  • Ailurophile

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    Oh my god!!! What was Zacky thinking going alone!!!?? I can't wait for the next update!!

    My vote vote is on a sequel :D
    November 10th, 2013 at 01:14am
  • Marissa.Motionless

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    I'd like a sequel, as I'm not a Kat fan
    November 9th, 2013 at 09:47pm
  • LadyRaven

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    Well now I feel like a dick! I didn't mean for you not to sleep!!! I just wanted to let you know that this story and you yourself was missed. I hope that you get caught up on your sleep. I'm very particular about my sleep, and so that is why I feel bad that you stayed up to post this. Though don't get me wrong I'm sure as hell glad that you posted a new chapter! Now I have to ask you to please not make us wait forever to make sure that Zacky is okay! I'm not particularly happy that I have been left wondering about the state of my favorite member from Avenged!

    OH by the way did you get my message about the concert? I also posted picture of the concert on my profile so that you could see them.

    Next, what I want to know is what the hell was Zacky thinking going out on his own!?!?!? I’m so pissed off at him right now for that! He knows he is in danger and he decides to take a fucking stroll in the woods!

    So I still think that Ava is in on all this! I don’t know how, but I’m positive that Ava was somehow able to get info to Drake on what has been going on. That Zacky has been isolated. Maybe it is because I hate her, and so therefore I want to demonize her as much as I possibly can. I know that we had talked about this being the plan all along with Ava and Drake (finish what they started all those years ago).

    And I totally forgot about the tea! Having Zacky isolated from Ava would be a problem without the tea. So I give Ava ¼ a point for giving Zacky the recipe. Sorry there is not redemption for her in my eyes but I will give fractions of a point for acts of kindness.

    I asked this in one of my last comments but I’ll ask again. I'm still wondering what those papers and the woman that Ava is hiding from the pack and Zacky. Are we going to find out about those? With all this mess going on, I've kinda forgotten about that, but not completely and I still want to know.

    I’m wondering what is going to happen to Zacky and Ava since they are mated. What happens when the whole story comes out and (I know this is a slim possibility) everyone doesn’t want her in the pack anymore? I mean I wouldn’t want a treacherous bitch in my pack (seeing as she would be responsible for watching my back and the backs of my pack mates).

    You should already know my vote but I’ll give it to you anyways. SEQUEL!!!

    So in the end I really just don’t know how to feel right now. I think I’m more confused now than I was when I first started reading this story. Here is why:

    I still don’t think that Ava really like Zacky, at least I hope not. I know for a while that I wanted her to, but now I can’t stomach the idea of her actually really liking Zacky.

    I don’t even know about Zacky anymore. He has to be the most confusing character in this story.

    Matt is now my second favorite!

    I really can’t stand Brian right now (and I never thought that would happen). I get why he is being the way he is but still there is such a thing at two sides to a story.

    And with that being said I understand that there is a side to Ava’s story that we aren’t getting but that just makes me not like her because she is always hiding things. And I just don’t see how her side of the story on what happened to Zacky is going to make up for letting what happened to him happen. I mean if she really didn’t want that to happen to Zacky then she could have snuck out the night that her brothers caught him and let him go! He didn’t have to suffer for four days. Whatever explanation (“excuse”) she may have is not going to be good enough.

    And lastly, I still haven’t figured out what the title of the story. I keep waiting for some divine revelation or something. I mean it is clear that a lot has been left unsaid by both Zacky and Ava. But is it just all the little revelations throughout the story that are the things unsaid, or is it something much bigger. I keep thinking that at the very end we are going to find that the “thing” that has been left unsaid is Zacky and Ava’s true feeling. Especially now in the wake of Drake taking Zacky. The way I see it going down is they rescue Zacky and at the very end both confess how they really feel. To be honest I hope to God and all things holy this is not how it actually goes down! Unless of course Zacky’s true feeling are utter distain for Ava, and she actually does like him! That would be awesome! Imagine being mated to someone who can never and will never love you, because of who you are! All along Zacky has felt this way (because he is a mutt and she is a pureblood) and to totally turn it around and have Ava feel this way would be pure justice! I LOVE IT!

    So yeah I hope that was an entertaining little read there for you! I just figured I’d share with you where my head is at, what I think is going to happen, and what would be really cool to have happen.
    November 9th, 2013 at 06:42pm
  • madi220

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    Oh my god cliffhanger! I would rather a sequal, because I really don't like Kat, but great update.
    November 9th, 2013 at 05:31pm
  • Bunny-on-Drugs

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    you always leave me sitting on edge when you stop the chapter damnit your driving me nuts(in a good way) honestly I'm tired of how matt is treating ava, really they just need to tell her so she can explain there has to be a good explanation for what they did to zacky, and i hope they all feel like foolish asshats when they find out what it is too! and as for zacky i hope he gets his rear end kicked a little so he can see how stupid he is for not talking to ava in the first place. i want a sequel because as much as i love matt, not so much a fan of kat to be honest. she just rubs me the wrong way!
    November 9th, 2013 at 04:55pm
  • LouellaBelle

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    Sequel please! This story is so intense!!
    November 9th, 2013 at 03:50pm
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    Oh my lorddd.
    Drake's a royal pain in the ass. I really hope Zack's okay.
    I'm also hoping everything gets sorted out with the guys, especially Brian and Zack. I feel bad that Matt has to hold in everything.
    Please update soon!
    November 9th, 2013 at 02:45pm