What We Left Unsaid - Comments

Fuck... This just broke my heart all over again. And I KNOW better! Dammit! Stupid leaking eyes...

Holy fucking shiiiiiiiiii... Dammit! Ava never did anything wrong Zacky, and if I remember correctly she was 18 and he 21 when he said all those cruel things to her? So she DID like Zacky, and tried to approach him about it, but he was awful to her. I understand why he was resentful and angry. I would have been too. But he’s now missed the chance to love his mate. God, poor Ava! The way her family treated her, and the way Zacky treated her, and she never even had any idea why! I can’t wait to sing my fangs into th sequel to find out about the documents, who the Swiss people are that we’re helping her, why she was sneaking around, and what she was hiding! I also can’t wait to find out their history together... He threw a drink at her? He insulted her when she came to him, he very nearly (if not actually) raped her. Sexually and physically assaulted my be the better term? I’d love to see him happy now, to move on, and for all the unmated guys to find their mates...

I just found this epicness! I’m curious to find out the backstory of why Zee and Ava hate each other so much... But I still don’t think it justifies Zacky forcing himself on her. I can’t wait to see where this goes!

So I just found this story and finished it in a day and I’m speechless. The chemistry between them all and the drama. It was the perfect mix of it all, but I just wanted to smash Ava and Zacky’s heads together so many times but also wished they’d just actually sleep together and get it over with. The ending caught me surprise because i was one of the ones to over look the genre of the story and now I’m heartbroken. I see that there is a sequel and i am going to go check that out now. Great work!

I swear I've read this story before (not someone else's, but this exact one) because here and there I would find myself saying "hey I remember this part!" However, I found myself completely hooked and not wanting to stop reading almost like it was my first time. You have a gift my friend! Though the only part (only because you asked) that I could find wrong was a few grammar typos (blame auto correct haha) and a couple punctuation issues... other than that it was perfect! Honestly has to be one of the best that I have read in a while! Original and not - so and so said... so and so said... and that was all the story. As far as the story goes I wouldn't change anything at all, but my brain is sitting here wondering how it would have played out had Zacky and Ava found out the truth about each other sooner. So from the bottom of my heart I want to thank you for this story, though I know it wasn't for me, I'm a horrible person and love a sad ending sometimes where stuff just doesn't end happily ever after.

WTF!!! I can't believe Ava died! I almost cried!!!

I don't really know where to start to be honest haha. I've had this story bookmarked for a while, I kept skipping over it to go to the next because I got put off reading Zacky stories by a bunch of other stories that annoyed me, which isn't your fault at all so I decided to give this one a go. Am I glad I did!!

Every great story ends in tragedy (I know there's a sequel but still haha) and this is a GREAT story! You have firmly reignited my love for all things Vengeance with this story!

To say that I loved it would be a complete understatement, I ADORED it! My god, you're a really good writer, and this is such a good story, which is hard to come by these days on this site, especially within the A7X fandom, sadly. I loved everything about this, the characters, the dialogue, the banter, everything! And I am SO glad that you didn't turn it into a sickly sweet romance half way through, you kept it real and totally believable. Even if I wanted to hit Zack a few times and back his and Ava's heads together haha. I kinda had a feeling, deep down, that their mutual hatred was masking their feelings for one another, but I never would have imagined that happening!!

I loved the cute moments between the two, them sleeping together but not actually sleeping together. The fact that she did nurse him after the first time he drank the tea. I thought that was incredibly sweet. And the familial love they all had for each other, just so precious!

One last thing before I go and read the sequel. I can't remember which chapter it was, but the one where Matt woke up and found that him being next to his mate was so calming, the fact that he thought it was the coolest thing was so adorable! And funny as I imagined it in my head haha. Loved it!

I truly, truly loved this story and now I shall go and spam your comment box on the sequel! XD

A friend rec'd this to me and oh my gosh, am I glad she did! I read the entire thing in one sitting. My eyes are on fire, my butt hurts and my mind is completely blown and it's all completely worth it! This story, your writing, just...I have no words. PERFECT. So absolutely perfect. I love Zacky but holy Jesus, I wanted to slap him stupid basically through this entire thing. And Brian, so protective, so jealous, I want to hug him, even more so now because Ava's dead. I can't believe she died! I just. I want to cry right now. I can't believe she died! What a way to end a story lol. I loved every word of this! Off to read the sequel now XD

I cried. this story was beautiful.

I cried just now that I read the ending, man. This was an AMAZING story even though it did frustrate me to no ennnd.
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OMG!!! You were about to have me bawling my eyes out. It didn't help that I'm listening to an emotional song, but the emotion came through your words effortlessly. I can't wait to read the sequel. You're an amazing writer and don't ever let anyone tell you different :)

Omg. i am so lost and confused. how did she die? what? omg. i can't get my head around this. amazingly written and a beauitful story. but i think i got lost in the last 2 chapters :S i can't understand how she died >.< hahaha. my dyslexia is getting the best of me. thank you for sharing this story with us all.

That end oh my god. It had me in tears. One of the best stories I've read on here and I cannot wait for the sequel, I truly loved how the real truth came out and it took such an intense and fast turn, then lead to this.

Keep writing like this, this is amazing and keep upt he amaaazing work.

I'm fucking crying right now. Like legit, I was catching onto what was happening in the epilogue, but when Zack came in I fuckin lost it. I've never read a fanfiction that has moved me like that. Holy shit the tears wont stop. Even Kat, ugh lord. I loved this friggin story. You already knew that though because I constantly tell you, but this epilogue really hit home. I feel for Zack, I wish I could hug his wolfy ass, as well as the rest of them. I fuckin love this story, and I can't wait to start the prequel.

God you're an amazing writer. Bitch, you made me cry. <3 x)

Oh, and another thing.

It's kind of a sad day to be Team Ava :(

You just broke my fucking heart with this story!!!! :( lol

When I read "small granite rectangle", goosebumps literally formed all around my skin. I can't believe Ava's dead!!! A teensy tiny part of me kind of expected it but NOOOOOO :(

To answer some of your questions:
-YES THE STORY AFFECTED ME! But, I think you've noticed by now with all of my comments throughout the story lol
-The story and your writing is awesome. Sometimes I would get confused when I started reading some of the chapters, since you don't outright point out who's talking at first, but that's your writing style and I'm slow sometimes lol.

This has been one of my favorite stories I've ever read on Mibba after all these years of me reading fan fiction. So, good job! :D I would give you some cookies if I knew you personally :D

No way... I can't believe she's dead, I just can't. I knew this wasn't supposed to be a happy story, but I still can't wrap my mind around the fact that she died! Gah, Zacky and Ava didn't even have some sort of closure on that confusion. Damn, I have tears in my eyes! D:

They're all so sad, and Kat feels so guilty, and Zacky didn't even speak... It broke my heart reading that... And it also broke my heart to know that this story is officially over. But luckily there will be a sequel :)

I loved this story, and I plan on reading it all again - when I have the time - and cry my eyes out again when I reach the end. It really is an amazing work :3

This was fucking sad! I wanted to read two chapters, but then I saw you've posted the whole story and I wanted to leave you a huuuuuge review, BUT I'm soo sad right now.
You know when I start reading a story and I forget how it's suposed to end or something like that. I'm just so into the story and I really hoped there would be a happy ending, BECAUSE Ava and Zacky deserved it. Not only them, but the two of them had so much misery in their live and...
you know what I mean. Well I was glad I was right with my theory when Ava told their brothers she was bored. And I'm also so sad, because Matt never got the change to tell her he was sorry.

But the epilogue was awesome, I was smiling like and idiot when the guys told the storys even if I knew she was dead. I was also glad about the things Kat said... and yeah, I'm so sad it ended.

Actually I do hope the sequel won't be a really sad/depressing story - I don't know if I'll survive this xD

But to end this I REALLY LOVED THE STORY! I loved it from the first moment I read it and still do. You did an awesome job! Thanks for letting me be a part of this world :*

Wow, I wasn't expecting this at all. Or was I? I dunno. It sucks the way she died. She died yelling after Zacky. They never got to officially clear the air between them. But then again, that fits the title 'What We Left Unsaid. I can't wait for the sequel. I feel so bad for everyone. Especially Zee and Brian :/ amazing story. You are awesome. I can't wait for your future writings

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