Set Fire to the Rain - Comments

I'm slowly catching up on your wonderful writing.
Love the rejection of the busty blonde at the wedding, hands off bitch! Also love all the declarations of, erm, love! I don't think it will be plain sailing but I've saved the post wedding chapters for another time so it is for me at the moment ;)
I'm off to Poland for a week but will read some more and send you some lame comments when I get back! Just got back from France so I have had no internet xo

@ trmerlo68
Thank you for commenting! So happy you are enjoying the story, and I hope to update again in the next few days. :)

Love the story...cant wait to see what Eliza does to David!! Hope u will be able to update soon?

@ hotmidnightstar
You are too kind. I knew something was missing when I posted it. Lol! Thankfully I didn't screw up too major! ;) lol

The mix up works either way. Still good stuff!!

@ hotmidnightstar
Thank you so, so much for the incredible compliments. I am humbled that you think that much of my story. It truly makes my day! As for the story, there are definitely a few things in store for all characters! I hope you continue to enjoy reading it through to the end. :)

Once again, I was hanging on every damn word. You have an amazing writing style. This David is one depraved man, and I hope that he gets tortured in kind, or at least a slow painful death. I think that would be a kind of poetic justice. Please tell me that you are not going to kill of Eliza at all, cause that would really suck. It'd be one hell of an twist, but it would still suck. As always, I look forward to what is on the horizon. I thought you had fallen off the face of the earth, and was lamenting the possible death of this story. So thank you for updating.

Oh shit, now its gonna get even more exciting. I knew her fucked up ex wouldn't stay gone. Now I'm freaking amped to see what fresh hell awaits, and what she's going to do.

@ hotmidnightstar
Thanks hun! This chapter was fun to write. Hang on, because its going to start getting....interesting. ;) As always, I love your comments, and thank you for reading. :D

Aawww...its so cute and fluffy! But then again, who wouldn't want to wake up beside Shannon Leto? Definitely got another one in the bag. Yay!!!!

@ marsmztik43
Thank you Nat!! Love ya babe! Happy you liked. I have dreaded posting that one for ages!!! Lol! And no, I am no longer a sex scene virgin!!! Woohoo! :)

@ hotmidnightstar
Awe, thank you!! Thank you for the compliments hun! Yes,I thought it was about time for some cookie tasting, as it were. Lol! ;) don't know if I'm going to go down that descriptive road again anytime soon. That was a doozie! :D. <3

However... You should have put ' baby you makin it harder, better, stronger, faster' in there some where!!!!!

Well written. Not too vanilla but not over the top erotic. And now you are no longer a sex scene virgin!!! :p

Oh, you naughty minx. This was amazingly well written. And its about time he got to sample that cookie. Well done. Bravo!!

@ hotmidnightstar
I love VyRT!! We did that last night too! Same thing happened with us. She was out before me, and made it to 10 minutes before the show started. Lol.

@ mysoul4jimmy
Its all good. I did the whole VyRT thing with my daughters yesterday. They got to see the first part but were asleep for the Church of Mars part.

@ hotmidnightstar
Thank you sooooo much for your kind words! I dont think i could ever give up on this story. I love it too much. :) Sorry I've been absent lately. Been working on a few chapters, and editing the next one. So I hope to have that one up in the next few days. Then, I had the chance to finally take my daughter and my best friend to see their first MARS show together, in Philly. It has been crazy! So hang in there, its going to get realllly goood! ;) I hope anyway. Lol.

Holy shitballs, where you been. I thought you gave up on this one. But once again, you eeked out an award worthy chapter. Thank you and try to update sooner. Thought I was gonna go crazy.

Shannon is such a gentleman, turning down the "cookie" because she'd been drinking. And they say chivalry is dead. Another great chappy. Loved it, loved it.