Everything Changes - Comments

I came her via comment swap. I really like it so far. The wording of a few things threw me off, but I pulled through. I can't wait to read more! I also agree with Synful Shadows when she says that you shouldn't have to feel like HAVE to update. I've been there and I've ended up just never finishing it. Work at your own pace and keep up the good work!

I'm wondering what will happen if she tells Zacky the truth? I hope she does but I don't want them to slip up cos of it. Please update soon :)

I hated Jacob at first but if he's mature enough to say sorry to Zacky then he's okay in my book. I hope there able to say friends though..I hope she does go to the airport..and its very mature of Zacky too

First off, don't ever feel like you have to update. You start doing that, and you'll grow to hate writing. I don't want that for you, and you should remember you're writing as much for yourself as for others. But hopefully writing other chapters will be easier for you. :)

Anyway, I started liking Jacob now even though he's leaving. It takes a lot to admit you're wrong, and to say that to the guy you pretty much can't stand is even harder, so good for him. I hope Zoey does go to the airport though. I don't want him to leave while they're on not so great terms. And it's nice that Zacky's trying to convince her to go to, when he could very easily not give a damn. I love him even more now. XD Great update! :D

Okay, I have to admit, I had to read the prequel beforehand. And in that one, I have to say that are some sentences that you need to change the wording in some of the sentences. But otherwise, it was a good fanfic. xx
I have just started to read this one, and its good so far. Hope it continues.

I think it's Johnny whos rescued her and maybe he's been beaten in the process or maybe she has? Please update soon. I can't wait to find out!

I am so mad at you right now, leaving us readers hanging! Gahhh I can't wait to find out what happens next. I cant stop wondering about what happens next so I hope you update soon before I go crazy!!! Love the story. !

Damn you for your fucking cliffhangers! >< We've already discussed how much I hate them. And you know what? I almost feel bad for Jacob, but I can't completely because he's scaring Zoey and reminding her of Fred. I'm a little surprised that she didn't catch on to his meaning at first either, but I guess she wouldn't have expected that. And damn, damn, damnity, damn, damn, I want to know what happens next! D: Great update though! :D

Johnny showed up at the park and the door maybe Jacob....? With zoey or Johnny all scared lol

I think Johnny rescued her and she's upset so maybe thats way he's surprised....
Major cliff hanger there
please update soon

So. Many. Cliffhangers.

I'm loving this and I can't wait to find out what Jacob has to say to Zoey so I hope you will update soon.

NOOO! Why must you leave us with a cliff hanger though I got a pretty good of what he's gonna say

Nooo why the cliffhanger! Update soon please

Well, at least she didn't let it escalate into something huge. :/ I think she should've let Zacky tell her the whole story though. But they are cute together, so I'm glad they're alright. :) And seriously?! You cut it off there! Not cool. At all. :P Great update though. :)

Hea gonna tell her he's in love with her I have a feeling -.-

I would love to wake up to that. Poor Johnny he just walks in at the wrong time

Well that was definitely a great way to wake up. ;) Poor Johnny for walking in on that though. And she's making progress with his dogs too! Yay! :D Except now there's going to be another fight. :/ I don't like that. Great update though! :)

Well at least that was fixed, even though there's still more to come. At least she believed Zacky, but that might be due to the fact that Jacob's story didn't really line up with her and Zacky's relationship. I'm just scared ablut what's next. :( Great update! :D

I don't think this fight is over yet...