Everything Changes - Comments

I am very proud of Zacky. I think Sarah has hooked up with Zack in the past. Maybe Jacob knows this and will use her to break Zack and Zoey up, Hmmmmm.

I don't know if I've commented on this story before. I'm usually a silent reader. But I have a feeling Sarah and Jacob know each other and that their friendship/relationship wasn't very pretty.

I admit that I didn't read all the chapters but I think this is a story I would like so I added it to my bookmarks so when I do my whole 'FINISH READING EVERY BOOKMARK' thing I will read yours and give another Comment, it's kind of my thing and I enjoy doing it. I have read the first chapter and I like the plot, is this a sequel because your summary made me think it was but you said nothing about a sequel? Keep writing and I'll keep reading

Okay, now Sarah can't even remember her name? What the hell is she trying to hide? And hell yeah for Zacky! Even though Zoe might not like that he punched Jacob, I don't care. He deserved it. And Zoe walked to his house in the rain? Cute, and I hope they can work things out now. :) Loved the update! :D

Well Zoey isn't gonna like that he punched him in the, though he did deserve it..

Hey there, little ol me from comment swap.

I am also a huge avenge sevenfold fan, Zacky being my favorite followed by Matt. I really like this story, it has a good feel to it and very realistic characters. You have wonderful grammar and spelling and the plot is glorious. Good job, Update. I would love to read more.

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I am a huuuuuuge Avenged Sevenfold and Zacky is my favorite after Jimmy. I really like how this flows. You have a lot of talent, thats not easy to say about most people. I really enjoyed reading this and I'll probably check out more of your stuff :)

Hey, I'm from comment swap :)

I only read the first three chapters because it's 2:30am and I have to sleep, but so far I really like it. It's very different to the hundreds of cliché A7X fics and I like that. Your grammar and spelling are perfect and your plot is flowing really well. I like your original characters too. Keep up the good work!

I really really like the length of your chapter and, you're use of dialogue is really great. The only issue I have is that all of the dialogue can be a little overwhelming. I would like to see a little more scene setting in between all of that. I kind of just lose a track of the characters a little bit.

Otherwise I really enjoy your writing style, and I think you have a real talent. Your grammar and ability to create person are impeccable. Keep up the great work. I love your idea and how you are putting it all together.

I do't mind your irregualr writing schedule. I noticed some one left a comment about your chapters being to long. I say bull to that. I love your long chapters. I can't stand when chapters are short..Loved the update. I don't think the talk with Zacky is going to go well honestly.

Gah, stupid Jacob. >< I knew that jerk was going to lie and say that Zacky called her a whore. Zacky just needs to kick that man's ass already. And Zoey's got it backwards with Jacob and Zacky. Jacob's the one with the immediate dislike! D: Oh, I hope they can clear the air, but I have a feeling that her talking to Zacky won't improve the situation. :( Great update though.

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First of all, I love Avenged Sevenfold. Zacky is so hot. The spelling and grammar are spot-on. I would maybe add in some description between dialogue. There's just a lot of talking. I would also maybe shorten up the chapters. They're really long. And then you have more chapters! Just a thought. This was awesome!

I think that Sarah chick is one of Zacky's exes....no joke. Lol. Still stuck on that haha

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Oh snap, an A7x fan-fic, yaaay(: I love avenged, and its lovely band members.
So the only thing I'm disliking is the fact that ITS SO GOOD. And I read the whoooooooooole first prequel, then went on to this, and wow. Just wow, Zoe has been through so much yet she's willing to give zach a chance<3

Jacob's an ass. I hate him. Especially because he's supposedly her best friend and called her a whore! D: Dick. >< I wonder what Zacky has planned though. Great update. :)

Jacob is an ass. I love this story though and I am ready for her to realize what Zack is saying. Ready for the next chapter.

Jacob just called his best friend a whore! That dick and to think i though he was an okay guy...Zoey needs to open her eyes

So I really didn't like that Comment swap gave me this because of it being a sequel and reading a prequel is too much effort. So I just read the first chapter. It seemed a bit boring, but I guess that goes for any first chapter. It seems you're getting a lot of good feedback from it though so I suppose it's really good. If I ever stop being a lazy bum, I'll make sure to read the prequel and the sequel.

Yay(: A7x from a comment swap! Weeell it took me some time because I had to read the prequel but I really love Zacky and Zoey together. haha their names rhyme(:! But why is it you didn't use Val and the others.
There is one thing I wish was different in the story-and life- I wish Jimmy was still alive:(

Hmmmmm, comment swap must be faulty 'cause I've commented on this one already! Sorry! Everything I said in my last comment still stands! :) So, in order to fill the character requirement, I need to keep writing this.