Dogfight - Comments

oh my god i love you you did it AHAH ajla;djkldfajlk; my bugging you must have pushed you over the edge but hey, YA DID IT :)

I love this story. xD

RAWR RAWR DINOSAUR THIS IS GETTING RAUNCHY TEHE

Interesting. Blake is quite the gentleman. Renny is so the girl in the relationship even if he can kick ass.Update please.

Renny so works at Safeway, doesn't he? And the characters only have Australian accents because I'm Australian and you're Australian.

Lugging bricks with Brick. That souldn't be half as funny as it is.

Awe poor Renny, Blake has it all figured out haha

Blake is too much. Omfg. And america accents. Maybe because im american..

ohmygoooddddddd!!! That was so cute i csnt even.. my feels.. i just.. aww :P He is so gentle with Renny it is insane! And Ren has an actual job! I am so happy for him!

omfg. I love Blake:D:D:D:D:D

Okay, so… life has been crazy and I haven’t comment in like… forever. I feel so bad about it :x Because you are actually one of my favorite writers online and I feel like I owe you the grace of a comment, no matter how crappy. :c

So, how about I try to make it up for you? Hell yeah for a comment on every chapter I missed? :D (All in one global comment, because I don’t want to be annoying :3)

Here it goes then:

Chapter 20 (I don’t know for sure I stopped commenting here, but let’s pretend I did): *sigh* I just… Blake’s so smitten. :3 he couldn’t seriously be looking at Renny like that without feeling anything. It’s when we feel that we actually notice, right? And this: “Just because I look like I would be at the bottom of a love-sandwich doesn't mean I'm not the pants in the relationship.” Omg, it’s so true xD and I had to laugh! I absolutely love how much they tease each other. Blake-has-the-hots-for-Renny-lalalalalala! The teasing, the freaking teasing! Asdfghjklç <3 Blake, baby, just admit you got the gaymones for Renny. EverY mibbian knows it, why won’t you??
I’m so in love with Blake *-* Alright, forget I said this… let’s move on.

Chapter 21: I LOVE BRICK. Okay, I said it. He’s so awesome and a total cupid, let me tell you. "Oooh, are you going to tie him to your bed and make sweet, sweet love to him all night long? Remember to use protection. Wouldn't want you getting him pregnant, my dear. Ah, but you never listen to me, so can I be the kid's godmother?" Ahhhh, laughed, laughed, laughed xD And I continue laughing. I can’t even focus on the freaking comment xD Omg, just… what was I saying? X

Sorry, I found this and can’t stop laughing yet again. I totally imagined Brick singing xDD

Chapter 22: I was just a puppet in his hands, a doll suspended in the air by frail strings that held me up but could easily push me down. … :’3 Why are you so perfect? Blake is so blind. If it wasn’t so cute I would spank him! It’s incredible how, even though he is basically incapable – both physically and mentally -, he’s going to that ring for Renny. No matter what they say about Blake Nichols and all that initial impression that he was that kind of person who doesn’t care, he’s an amazing human being. That’s one of the reasons I love him that much. Just…. Perfect in every way.

Chapter 23: 1st - What I said about Blake? Yeah, totally fits Renny as well. I guess they really are a perfect match, aren’t they? Two stubborn, teasing, bathed-in-male-pride boys who just completely have it for each other. Having Renny that worried about Blake gives me some kind of reader’s butterflies, so cute! :3 …. 2nd – HOLY SHIT! I actually thought Blake was going fine and would continue to be fine, but you just had to twist it around, hadn’t you? Renny worried, Renny screaming, Renny running, Renny saving Blake… Renny getting STABBED! WTF? D’: OMG, poor baby, my poor poor baby!! </3

Chapter 24: I could say lots of things about this chapter, but I just can’t focus. Here goes the only thing that was in my brain in the end: vomit’s rainbow. OH.MY.BLAKE. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! ASDFGHJKLLMFNBVUAILNFBUIAOLMCNBVFAYUIORGMNB ACFGUIROKGLMNVBCAYGUHIOKLGMNKBVAGHIJOKP THEY KISSED! BLAKE AND RENNY, BLAKE.AND.RENNY. KISSED! OMG! DRFTAGIHUIJVNJBHEYHUISOPAPLCLDMVNKJBRHUGIJOPLKDJCNB!

Chapter 25: This. Chapter. Is. Simply. Cuteness. Overload. So, so, so adorableeeeee! *-* Renny in love might be the most adorable thing I’ve ever imagined. Omg. *-* I can’t stop! I wanna pinch him *-* and Blake *-* omg *-* "You're not hopeless, Renny. You're amazing, but you just can't see it. Not everyone can remain as strong as you after all the shit you've been through.” I melted like ice-cream under a scalding sun. *-* They’re so sweet. And HELL YEAH for Renny being out of the Doghouse. Finally! That place gives me the creeps x.x

Chapter 26: There goes Brick again xD he’s so amazing, I can’t even! Gah. :D … take it, Nelson you fucker, take it!!! Ahhh! Would love to see you green and purple from anger! Take it, asswipe! Just drown in your vomit of stupidity! I’m so satisfied now ^^ And yeah, the cuteness. The. Freaking. Cuteness. I just love my boys ;-; <3<3<3<3<3

Chapter 27: And this leads me to the part when I say: just pounce him already, Blake! Wear the fuckin’ pants in the relationship for once in your life (or better yet, don’t wear them, because I’m sure things wouldn’t work out that well :$). Anyway, I imagined myself as the lady who was watching in on them talking about sex, but the only thing I could visualize was me laughing my ass out (and probably passing out from lack of oxygen :3). Too funny!! xD

The global result? I LOVED EVERY. SINGLE. FUCKING. CHAPTER. I adore your capacity of giving your readers such a flowing reading, the way you can make us laugh and cry and giggle and even blush just from your words. This story is everything. I lost count of the times I had tears in my eyes from laughing so much :’D Even while I was writing this comment, I kept smiling like an idiot and when I noticed I was like ‘WTF are you doing, you idiot??’, but I kept doing it anyway! Just… you are such a beautiful writer. From everything to everything. Amazing, marvelous, breathtaking and heart-stopping; these are just some things that can describe this story. But I guess Perfect will do it fine. :’3 I don’t know what else to say, just that I am a big fan of yours and it can’t be more justified.

Bravo.

I can’t wait for more. :’)

:D Haha, That was interesting. I think he was a little more than blunt about it, and the accent thing, I picture them with English accents....Haha. It's weird. Update soon!!!

I actually imagined them British. Lol

(wooh. been reading forever and this is my first comment. roflwaffles :D)

Amazing as always :3

Haha, tell me about it, it sucks going back to school. I start again on Tuesday too -.-"

Great chapter as always :) I don't know if I imagine them with an Australian accent, cause I can't tell one from another and I live in Australia.. But oh well! They talk, at least :)

Hahaha well that was great..... :p anyways! No, I imagine them with american accents compleatly :p

HahaHAhaHA oh my god this is hilarious I love you S. Seriously if people knew what went through your dirty little mind... gah, i can't wait for what's next ;P Need some help? lolity lols MEOW

I know I just commented but who cares. Blake is so cute, him and his condoms.
I imagine them with an American accent, since I'm not from Australia.
My Australian accent always comes out sounding British. D:

I've been putting off reading this for some time now and I have absolutely no fucking idea why. IT'S AMAZING, GAH.
I loooooooooove Renny's personality switch, it's fucking adorable. I CAN'T, AAAAAAAAAAAAH.
He's just so cute and evil and cute. I can't handle it.

My favourite is Blake. He's just so kind and watching him slowly change and fall in love with Renny is fucking adorable. When he finally admitted he liked Renny, I died. I was lifting my laptop in the air to rejoice and then I somehow manage to hit myself in the head with it. That's how excited I was. :3

Blake is definitely the top, in my opinion. I just can't image Renny topping him but maybe Blake should take some precautions. Like tie up Renny's hand and legs. Just in case he decides to out of reflects shattered his bones into a thousand pieces while there going at it. Wow that's kinky. >:D

What made this especially enjoyable to read was noticing your writing gradually improving as the story progress. That was really cool to watch. I really enjoyed this, keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next update.

THIS IS SO GODDAMN FUCKING AWESOME LIKE I'M SCREAMING BECAUSE IT'S SO PERF AND AH YOU'RE A BRILLIANT WRITER AND I JUST HAVE SO MANY FEELS RIGHT NOW BUt yeah, I'm really enjoying this story. You're writing style is amazing; I'm truly in awe of you.
I think I have a crush on Renny, he's just so adorable and ballsy. It's all just so great!
You commented on my story (Touch Me 'Till I Follow in Love) all the time and this comment I'm giving you is a total fail whale compared to what you would send me!
But this is seriously one of the best stories I've read on Mibba, and it's your writing that really keeps me captivated.
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Anyways, update when you can. I will be waiting!!! <3

Fuck Nelsons stupid ass. He dont get none of my lovin.

OH MY GOD, I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED THIS!!! AAAAHHHHHH!!!! THEY'RE JUST TOO PERFECT TOGETHER AND BRICK IS HILARIOUS AND I'M SO MUCH IN LOVE RIGHT NOW!!