The Best Mistake - Comments

  • Arizona.Beauty.

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    Ah, this is sooo good! Psh, he obviously likes her- just needs to stop being so difficult! Update soon please!? <3
    April 22nd, 2012 at 10:32am
  • PoetWithoutHerMuse

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    why the fuck is Nash so fucking irresistable? love this story
    April 22nd, 2012 at 07:07am
  • BurstYourBubble

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    Awwww he came to her :)
    April 22nd, 2012 at 07:05am
  • alonginginmybones

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    Loooooveee ittt
    April 22nd, 2012 at 06:20am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Love the new chapter!!!!!!
    April 22nd, 2012 at 04:51am
  • amurph25

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    oh my goodness! he's being nice!!!!!
    April 22nd, 2012 at 04:48am
  • Shadow14

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    I knew it was Nash when she said she heard something upstairs. I was really hoping that they'd kiss again while they're in the bathroom, I'm still hoping that. I love how Nash said "You have to buy me dinner first, before you undress me" it was funny. I started laughing and my family looked at me like I was crazy-well crazier than usual
    April 22nd, 2012 at 03:23am
  • unkemptRose

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    This story is very enjoyable, little on the slow side with building up to whatever point, you wanna make. Awesome job though:)
    April 22nd, 2012 at 03:04am
  • charlie smith

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    Amazing update, I'm glad they really seemed to connect in this chapter (; Can't wait for moreeee!
    April 22nd, 2012 at 02:56am
  • IceDeath.

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    Awesome chapter. He kissed her. OMG!!! Then he was worried. So cute. Nash does have a heart. Even if it is small. haha. Love the Chapters. Update soon!!!!
    April 21st, 2012 at 06:09am
  • IceDeath.

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    Awesome chapter. He kissed her. OMG!!! Then he was worried. So cute. Nash does have a heart. Even if it is small. haha. Love the Chapters. Update soon!!!!
    April 21st, 2012 at 06:09am
  • Shadow14

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    I love how Jas convinced Levi to let her go with "the look" ahaha I also love the fight, but I would have liked some more details (sorry I'm violent and love fights)
    April 21st, 2012 at 05:13am
  • This.Is.Me.

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    I LOVE IT!!!<3 MORE please:)<3
    April 20th, 2012 at 07:02pm
  • BurstYourBubble

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    Psshhht that kiss meant something . .
    April 20th, 2012 at 05:29pm
  • graceful swans;

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    Nash is such an asshole sometimes. ._.
    April 20th, 2012 at 02:18pm
  • charlie smith

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    WHY NASH WHY. Really great chapter though (;
    April 20th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • Shadow14

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    I think Nash is lying about the kiss meaning nothing. I'm seriously thinking that he's bi-polar due to one minute he's kissing Ashlyn and the next he's threatening to kill her. I like how Alex likes superheroes, "Like Superman, right?" haha I like that.
    April 20th, 2012 at 04:38am
  • PoetWithoutHerMuse

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    love this<3
    April 20th, 2012 at 03:03am
  • Young Diamond

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    The first three lines of chapter one caught my attention. This is a very unique story and is very creative. I'm subscribing.
    April 20th, 2012 at 01:23am
  • dreamsinthedaylight

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    Update Soon! I had to search and resubscribe to this story, It's great. Can't wait for the next update!
    April 20th, 2012 at 01:16am