I don't think it sucks. I love it. I love how Alex was so curious and serious about Nash, I also like his remark, "Are you deaf?" haha I like how Nash seems comfortable around Alex and he reminds him of Eric. I wonder how Nash got these bruises. I'm starting to think that he did it to himself, but more unknowingly. Like he might be bi-polar. Either that or he's still with his father (if that's the guy he's been having flashbacks about; the guy that stabbed him in the flashbacks). And his father is the one that does it to him. Those are just my theories though. I like-no I love how Nash finally kissed Ashlyn, I've been waiting for that to happen for a while now. I wonder what she thinks of it all. I wonder what he was thinking throughout it too.
I like how Nash smiles and completely forgets about Ashlyn when he talks to Eric. I wonder what happened to her dad? I have a feeling he died... Anyways, I can't wait to see what you do next.
I like how Nash worries about Eric, it shows he really cares. I like drunken Nash too. He's funny and childish, it's cute. I know what Nash goes through when it comes to his nightmares and stuff, I have something like that and I've ended up attacking a few people in my sleep or when they wake me up without realizing it.