A Soulless Heart - Comments

Oh wow... This story's playing with my fucking emotions like oh my god...poor Kari :( but I believe both men do love her, other wise they would have disposed of her by now .-.

OMG! I did believe him! Now i feel betrayed :'(

I actually fell for it...wtf lol...damn

I actually thought Syn had changed. Damn. Hopefully she figures it out soon though. Seems like both guys love her even if they try to deny it.

*claps* brilliant just brilliant u had me fooled until the end just wow I give u props, Syn u r an amazing actor can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Amazing.

OH MY GATES... this is fucking genius. Wow Syn lied to her but Shads is deff in love with her, no doubt :D

Sad he lied to Kari :(

He acts like such a sexy sweetheart, but he's really an ass. A sexy ass. Love this chapter! <3

Omg I knew it! I let it go last chapter, but I was reading this and thinking "bull! Syns still evil!" Oooh and i was right, i love being right hahaha!! I so loved this chapter, little sexy time rolled in with deception and that possessive Shadows at the end saying he would turn her! Im so surprised by that, didnt think he would want her around that long! So excited for the next chapter!!!

I feel so betrayed right now, I really thought Syn was a good vampire D:, so that makes you a great writer, cause I did believe she'd end up with Syn and he'd kill Shadows. I'm dying to know how this story will end, although I don't want to end it so soon. xD

Omg let me just say I finally started reading this last night (because i'm a horrible person it took me forever) and I love you for it. It's just so gaaaaahh so unlike everything else i've been reading that's been so predicable. When Shadows tricked her making her think Matt losing his soul was just a dream.. I just .. I about died. I'm not even done yet I just couldn't wait to comment any longer hahah okay going to finish it now!!

Daaaaaaaamn itttttttt.

Aw man :(
I was hoping Syn was telling the truth. I'm so mad at him right now D:
Ugh, Shadows doesn't know what he wants and he's starting to annoy me.. first he wants Kari, then he doesn't want her and wants some other chick instead and now he wants her again?
Syn seemed rather weird when Shads said to him that she was his and that Syn had to give her to him.
I'm still hoping that Syn actually likes and wants Kari. The way that he 'tucked a few strands behind her ear' and kissed her forehead while she was asleep is confusing me.. I mean. No one was watching him so why did he do it, ey? :3
I can't wait for the next chapter :O

I so wanna punch Brian in the face right now...that fucking bastard!:D

Oh man i knew Syn had to be acting....
Shadows wants her back,
Will he really turn her?
I wish Syn was going to be good but like you said he aint going to be like Spike.
I love this chapter XD
Kari really needs to start thinking because she's going to get hurt even more.
Well she was smart not to say anything about getting Matt back.
Update soon.
Can't wait to find out what happens next XP

ah man i wanted to believe that Syn was nice for real, guess once a douche, always a douche.. hahahahah uh, Shads wanting Kari back?? sounds like this is going to be fun, a battle between shads & syn over kari???

Ah so sad, lol so syn is being a fake..... I'm kind a sucker for Brian but this whole shads still being possessive is absolutely intriguing. Can't wait for more!!! Keep it coming! :)

Oh man, *hangs head in shame* you had me soo good, but I have to say I love what an evil shit Syn is..he is like a walking wet dream for real..haha So shadows still wants her and possibly wants to turn her? Is it awful of me that I still want her to have hot dirty sex with evil syn? haha, maybe someone just needs to do a sequel just for him and his bad self...*hint hint* ...I want to say how naive kari is, but I mean I almost believed it there for a little bit, but had my suspicions still...she is just to quick to look for the good in everyone. Wonder if she is going to get to use the potion on Shadows before he tries to turn her AND will Syn just let Matt take her back? I cant wait for more of this!!!!

I knew it was too good to be true about Syn having his humanity back. He really has Kari fooled I mean I was starting to believe Brian's lies.
I can't believe that Shadow wants to turn Kari :O
I can't wait for the next update :)