A Soulless Heart - Comments

Another great chapter, shame it's ending soon! I wish I just started reading it so I can read it all again. I was still a bit confused whether gates was pretending or not and I see he is which is a tad annoying because I want her to end up being happy in the long run.

Ah-Ha! Syn was lying the entire time. Poor Kari. She's so naive and gullible. Maybe because I'd believe anything Syn would say to me too, haha. Okay, well I am looking forward to seeing how this all plays out. Shadows wants to turn Kari! :O

Damn it!!1 I was really hoping one of them was the good guy. but I guess neither of them are, though it seems like Shadows has taken a real likiing to her. Enough to even turn her

I knew something was up! I was so close to believing Gates! Oh my gosh, you're genius :)

Jeez this story I almost exactly what happened to me in high school...

Dammit! You're good! I believed to him for a while, but damn!
I wanted Syn to be good, should have expected from him .__. and now Shadows wants her, dude even I am like back the fuck off ¬¬ Hahaha
Oh my god.... turn her!?! Didn't see that one coming (Yes, I did) ANYWAYS.....
More soon! :3

I knew he was a dirty rotten liar! Damn asshole, but I knew the whole "humanity is slipping back" thing was too good to be true even if a part of me wanted it to be true. XD Poor Kari. At least Syn doesn't know about her potion, right? Or does he and is just pretending to be oblivious? Hmm. I'll have to think on that for a while. But I am happy to get a little Syn smut in here! ^.^ And I'm curious what'll happen with the whole Shadows situation and when Kari will find out that Syn was just playing her. Great update! More soon pretty please! :D

I am excited and so confused, and mad because they're playing her...but this story is so good!

-slaps- YES I believed Syn, you jerk. >_> I should have known better, right? Haha ANYWAY finally got all caught up on this so I am therefore obligated to comment. Jeez, Kari just can't catch a break, can she? Yes you're good at writing, you had me convinced! Sitting here like "Oh, maybe she'll finally have a way out!" ...But no. Because you're mean. >:P

...All the sex.

Anyway, loved the update and I'm really interested to see where you go with this. Oh, and I may or may not have blushed seeing my story at the bottom. Thank you. :3 Update again soon! (And you're not really a jerk. :P <3)

Loved the update

Loving the twist this story took! Update soon!

Hey! Someone on my mibba recommended your story and I just finished reading it today! OMG I am very impressed how this story is turning around - Matt being evil and Brian just being adorable as ever! *-* It surprised me a lot! It's a great fic and the plot is amazing and I really want an alternative end if my opinion matters! :) Keep doing this great work and don't take too long to update! LOL Bye bye! xx

I've been subscribed to this for a little while and have been reading a few chapters here and there, and now that I'm all caught up, I finally feel like I can comment! Lol. I love this story so much - seriously. I love Kari's character and well ... I used to love Matt's character, but obviously, he's been a bit of a dick as of lately, and Syn ... he seriously surprised me! I feel so bad that Kari is still holding onto that strong love she felt for Matt and I hate when he throws that in her face and uses it against her. I can only imagine how fucking bad that feels. Like I said, I really love this and hope you update soon! :)

I LOVE THIS!
Well i love Matt, but an alternative ending including Syn ;) i like! <3 haha

I'm for an alternative ending :D

wow so all this time Syn was trying to protect her and he has been getting his humanity back. It's sad that he lost his financee like that, but I wonder if he's really telling the truth.
Great update :)

I say yes to alternate ending, i love alternate endings!!! Also omfg!! I did not see all that coming from Syn. Im very anxious to see how Shadows keeps acting. I love this story!!!!!

I'm for the alternate ending! Just more to love about this story!...So Syn has been very sneaky...I love it...im rooting for these two to be together. I found it really creepy how shadows turned all like "my precious" with the poor little virgin girl " *Shudders*..lol. I want sexy time with Kari and Brian...lol...more soon please!

You know how I feel about the alternate ending DO IT! DOITDOITDOIT! And this chapter. LOVE this chapter. Synyster is so sneaky, sneaky :P

Aw. I really want her to end up with Brian
I feel so sorry for him D: Let's hope he's telling the truth.
Weird how Shadows suddenly didn't want her anymore cause Syn got him a virgin.. but hey, i'm not complaining xD More lonely time for Bri and her :3 Wooo

oh goddamn teary-eyed like mad right now.. i sure hope syn/brian is telling the truth and not just playing around with her alt. ending?? hell yeah, i really wanna read both of your ideas