A Better Man - Comments

im not a huge fan of french fan fiction in fact i have no idea who any of the people are what im getting from the comments here is that this story is about harry potter i am also not a huge patter nerd i didnt recognize anyone in the story the layout is beautiful and the fact that you decided to write the chaters in french is a really cool idea

Here because of comment swap. I love Harry Potter so I love the fact that she's teaching at Hogwarts! The chapters are a little short for my taste, I like to have some substance in them because it gives more time for descriptions as well as for the reader to soak in the story and enjoy. Overall, I like it, and I learned a tiny bit of French too!

I wonder what's up with her. I hope it's nothing serious (no pun intended). I wonder about a lot of things and just what will happen now she's at grimaulds place 12 and if they know her name. Hmmm... Another good chapter.

Ooh, I read this whole story in no time at all; it's so good!
Update as soon as you can!

awwwwww! this chapter was too short! :(

awwwwww! this chapter was too short! :(

not quite but close your story, your update speed I wonder what Sirius' role will be for her, is there a sort of love triangle going to happen for a while? old rivavly might flame up again by that and that could be pretty funny to watch or rather read about I also wonder what happened to mister Severus Snape and if she has to go into hiding now that the Dark Lord knows of her and her connection to Severus. I also wonder about a lot of other things, but it's pretty late and this comment is already long enough... Good chapter!

Hi! I recently started reading your story and I'm loving it! Sorry I didn't leave a comment before! I'll be waiting for the next update! ^^

Hmm... Can't remember if I have comments before my last one. Oh well. Anyways, I like the writing style you're using for this, it's very fitting. I like the characters, with all there twist and turns and backgrounds and how realistic they seem to be. I also enjoy how they interact with one another. This is also written realisticly. I like the feel of the story, it's easy to imagine and easy to get caught up in. Hmmm... So far I also like the plot line and events, romance and drama so far. I can't really think of anything bad about this, or errors or anything else about it right about now. It's a really good story so far, updates every 3 days does seem fair and I'm looking forward to that next update in 3 days.

I really like the plot because I love Harry Potter stories and I've read my fair share of them, so this one is very refreshing. You're a really good writer too, and I like how you are portraying the characters. I do think you can make the chapters a bit longer with some more detail and an original layout would be nice too, but it is overall a very good story.

I'm not a huge fan of HP fan fictions but I believe this to be an exception to that rule. I think it is beautifully written and I love the description. Your characters are brilliant and I love your description of Snape! :)

The plot seems unique and very well thought out which may be why I like it so much :P

I've read this before. I don't remember unsubscribing or anything like that.. Hmmm... Well I'm a subscriber now at least and it's still an awesome story.

Comment swap sent me here again and I apologize. I know you want comments from new readers. But anyways. I really liked how you wrote Snape. It was almost cute hah. Again, this is only the second Harry Potter fanfic I've read so my judgement is likely medicre at best. But! I really enjoyed the writing style and the character interactions. The plot/concept was unique which was refreshing and I really enjoyed it. The desription was good but I felt it could have been better. I also did enjoy it being kind of a back story on certain characters and the overall way it was written. The length was a challenge for me and I had to take several breaks during reading but Im known to make obnoxiously long one-shots. So I have no room to talk lol. Regardless; great job! :] xoxoxo

This is the third time I've gotten this on comment swap so, again, I will repeat everything I said before. I am a huge fan of Harry Potter, so this story was right up my alley. I absolutely loved reading this, and I think your writing style is amazing. I absolutely loved the plot and the relationship with Snape. I also think this was very well-written and descriptive. I can't wait for more! Great job and keep up the good work!

I just got this on comment swap again, so I'll just repeat everything I just said. I am a huge fan of Harry Potter, so this story was right up my alley. I absolutely loved reading this, and I think your writing style is amazing. I absolutely loved the plot and the relationship with Snape. I also think this was very well-written and descriptive. I can't wait for more! Great job and keep up the good work!

I am a huge fan of Harry Potter, so this story was right up my alley. I absolutely loved reading this, and I think your writing style is amazing. I absolutely loved the plot and the relationship with Snape. I also think this was very well-written and descriptive. I can't wait for more! Great job and keep up the good work!

Hey, I've been brought here by the comment swap thingy :D
I'm not a big Harry Potter fan, seeing as I'm only familiar with the three first movies, so I was thinking about reading the first five chapters or so and give my opinion, but I couldn't.
Even if I'm not familiar with lots of stuff about this 'theme', I was hooked to the story ever since the beginning, and I had to read every chapter and subscribe!
I think it's amazing! I love the plot, the action, the dialogues and her relationship with Snape. I also like how Lupin enters in the story and this last confrontation with Voldemort.
I seriously love your style of writing as well. It got my full attention, and the details and dialogue, and adding those French parts made it even better!
I'm hoping to read more from this fic.
Really great job! :D Congratulations!

I love this story, gah! Harry Potter has been a part of my life for as long as I can remember, so it's always great to read about Hogwarts! This is so different than the typical Harry Potter fan fictions I've read. The first chapter pulled me in. Your fluency with words and sentences is amazing, so you get major credit there! I love the pairings too. There aren't too many Lupin stories, though I have seen the occasional Snape. I love it though. Gosh, you better keep writing this! I'm so interested! Thank goodness for comment swap. :'D

This is a very addicting story that had me caught from the start. i love your writing style. keep it up!

I also found this from comment swap. I'm not a Harry Potter fan -- don't have a problem with it, just never got into the books -- but from the first few chapters, it seems like you have a good writing style. Apologies for not reading the whole thing!