Of Suspenders and Curls - Comments

Teehee I liked this chapter! I love the whole story! I can't wait for the next update! (:

It probably says something that my mind immediately jumped to the seen in New Moon right about now... I'm so glad you updated this. I'm just really in love with this story and it's brilliant and um, anything else i want to say is just me fawning over it, so, um, bye now.

Please update this

Candy Bowl!
Oh wow! I love One Direction but I never imagined them as vampires! Lol, I’m already in love with your story! Your writing is superb! I only noticed a couple of misspellings. That can easily be corrected though. I really like the way you describe things in the story and how your dialogue is believable. I’m in love with vampire stories and this story is already awesome! Sorry if this comment is a little short. There aren’t enough words to describe how much I love this story though! Keep it up!

Oh my gosh, I had no idea you wrote this! I read this once before and I thought it was good but I was too lazy to leave a comment. I never would've guessed you'd be the author. (That's a compliment, don't worry!)

This is so good by the way. The banner made me unf because Loueh and Harreh as vampires is just so gorgeous, omg. Why did Harry return to the vampires, though, if he's so scared of them? Oh right. HE LOVES LOUIS. Anyways, this was fab and I loved it.

The reason I picked this story is because I’ve never, not once, heard of a One Direction vampire fan fiction. Hmm, I’ve never read a story without any kind of romance, but this quite good! I like that you included the bromance between Liam and Louis, not just Louis and Harry. I laughed while reading every chapter I'm older than you, your son and your entire family's age added together. I smirked at that thought. Just how old IS he? xD And oh gosh, Liam’s comment about Harry being not so bright in the second chapter got a good chuckle out of me. And when Harry made the garbage truck comment. :’) The second chapter is the chapter that pulled me in. Really, that chapter drew me in so much that I subscribed. I’m still chuckling every so paragraphs: Me and the lads have no difficulty in picking up girls due to our unearthly beauty. Damn right!

I just got done reading the whole thing. You have an excellent idea going on, and I do hope you continue this story! You have the perfect mix of characterization and plot, along with some added comedy (at least I think they’re meant to make me laugh x3). Good job so far!

By the way, that title is just props to that!

This is unlike anything i have evr read before....i like it a lot.....i don't really know who one direction is (i know...so sue me?) but other than that it is very good. lookin at previous commetns it seems you have kept your readers involved so good for you!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!

I don't understand how I haven't come across this before. I mean the boys as vampires? (except from Harry of course) That's just so amazing x) I like how this isn't like the vampire stories that are around now and it's very interesting, how Louis and his coven has to find someone to bring into their coven. And then Harry came around, wow, I didn't really expect that, I wonder why he did....
But yeah, I absolutely love this so far and I'd love to read more of it. Update soon? :)

Yay Harry came around:) I really like this fanfiction; update soon? :) xx

Wooooo! This is coming along swimmingly! I'm ready for the next chapter! (And thanks so much for the wonderful mention in the author's comments because you are wonderful.)

On a side-note... were you expecting this to be this long? Because I remember you saying it wasn't going to be very long, but now here it is, becoming longer...

Damn it did I just set myself up for the biggest that's what she said.

Poor Lou. I just wanted to hug and console him too. I love how all the boys gathered to give him encouraging words.
Harry has arrived omg. I can't wait to see what's in store next! :)

Funny thing, I was literally just thinking about asking you to update, when I saw that you did! You're psychic, I applaud you. Poor Harry, so confused. Poor Louis, so stereotypically vampirical (is that a word?).
I also only had to refresh the page, aha.

This just made my day. Really it did.

(Just wanted to let you know the background image is down. If you know and I'm being annoying, I'm so so sorry.)

I. Love. You.
This is fucking amazing and the video... OH YES. OVARIES HAVE EXPLODED TWICE AT NIALL, unf.
Lovin' the Larry and LiLou! Niall is so cute, omg.
WWI Niall?! The only thing that would make it better is WWII Niall!
Fuck it, I want to write a Niall vampire oneshot.
/fangirling

Wow this is a really good fanfiction, I am very interested in where you go with this, please update :D

Ah, I fail as a person.

So, yes there are some little things you need to change in this chapter that I'm sorry I didn't get around to beta-ing when I was supposed to... but you have no idea how excited I am to hear the boys' back stories because they sound awesome according to your authors comment and that also means you're making this longer which you didn't plan on doing in the beginning yayyyyyy-

Kay done now. You're awesome.

Okay so once again sorry for my lateness, I've been away for a while.

Moving along, I'm soooo loving the Lilo dynamics. They are so cutesy like brothers/BFF's and I keep flailing everywhere.

And, omg as soon as I read Gemma's name I literally shouted out, "Louis no!" (of course he didn't listen) and ugh, Harry just let Louis explain okay you're the chosen one!

Alright so I'm going to try to get on Mibba more often and hopefully you update soon because I love this!

great update!
I hope harry comes around soon..
update soon! can't wait for more(:

So I came across this a while ago but somehow or other I never commented. I think I'd figured you'd quit it, good to know you haven't because I really like this.

Mainly - 'Of Suspenders And Curls'? One of the cutest and most appropriate 1D fanfic titles I've ever come across.

I really like where this is going. 17th Century Louis? And a WW1 Niall? Yes please.