Of Suspenders and Curls - Comments

i love the story far!:) an i hope harry come around. update soon plzzz!:)

HARRY OMFG I KNOW YOU ARE IN SHOCK BUT STOP IT.
SIGH.
I hope he comes around and understands that Lou, even though he's a vampire, is an alright guy.
AND 17TH CENTURY LOU YES PLEASE.
UGH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
(excuse my caps, I have lots of feels)

First of all, THANK YOU FOR TELLING ME ABOUT THIS STORY.
I can't even express how much I enjoy this! I've read my fair share of vampire fics and let me tell you, they weren't all well written. BUT THIS! Ugh, this is brilliant!

I am such a sucker for Larry Stylinson AND I LOVE LILO/LILOU OMG I DON'T KNOW WHY IT'S NOT MORE POPULAR IN THE FANDOM BUT I LOVE IT! (mostly because Louis is my favorite and Liam is my second favorite).

But I am seriously in love with this already. I love Louis and Liam's relationship and the way you write about vampires. I.E. the rules and regulations and such. You're a fabulous writer and there weren't even any spelling or grammar mistakes which made me want to cry tears of joy. Seriously

Okay, see, when she said 'Gemma' I had assumed it was Harry's sister since her name is Gemma and then BOOM Harry showed up and I literally screamed' I KNEW IT' and now he's seen Louis not only nibbling on his sister's neck but drinking her blood and oh man I just can't wait to see what happens next.

I've subscribed and recommended it and I will now sit here and twiddle my thumbs and wait for the email informing me of an update!

Yay for editing! Second chapter sounds and looks much better :)

I DON'T KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATED OH NO SO SORRY IF THIS IS REALLY LATE BECAUSE I INTENDED ON COMMENTING.

Omg, that opening sequence in the second chapter was priceless! I really love the character relationships you write, they're fantastic! And good explanation following up with Niall's dialogue in calling him 'Loueh'. But an explanation that wasn't included that I felt was necessary was an explanation of what the previous "NO!" was about... I'm guessing they can read each other's minds? But that needs to be stated.

Hahaha, dying at Louis' 'male donors' comment XD

And there are some little writing mistakes I'll message to you so as not to clog your comments page with another super-long one of mine, haha!

Oh, I really love what you're doing with this! And I like the 'set of rules' idea too :) Very interesting... can't believe I'm saying this, but update soon! xx

(Ugh, sorry for the gibberish that is my comment. It's so late and I can't think straight anymore XD)

Wow. I actually really like this.
This is really good so far!
Update soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next.

Okay, I have to admit that when I got this story in the comment swap, I wasn't too thrilled, seeing as I have a pretty strong dislike for One Direction. (But I did know who all the characters were because my sister loves them, so...)
But, actually, I do like this! This is a great first chapter and really makes me want to know what happens next... especially concerning Harry. Just a shame there's no actual slash in it, though ;)

Okay, 1D fan, but certainly not a vampire fan, and somehow, I still loved this! I mean, granted it's the first vampire-esque story I've ever read, but your writing skills are definitey something to be praised. I don't know much of anything about vampires, and without going, "...oh, and a coven is blah blah blah... and they can run because blah blah blah..." I could figure what was meant by the way you wove them in to the story.

And I love the relationship between Liam and Louis. It seems so appropriate to their RL personalities, and works for a grasping and lovable friendship here :) (And quite honestly, I'm not a fan of the gay bromances. So I think I'm going to enjoy this haha).

Just one other thing, personally, I don't like Harry so far. I think it's the way he's speaking... somehow I'm not convinced he's a sixteen/seventeen year old boy (wait how old is he in this?).

But you've got me subscribing, and I absolutely would love if you wrote an entire fic of this, rather than just a mini-series. The characters so far show a lot of potential and I would love seeing what happens to them! :)) THUS ENDS MY RIDICULOUSLY LONG COMMENT. LOVE, ME

I'm gonna be honest with you on this one. I'm not a fan of 1D, so I was lost almost the entire time, however I will give you points for originality and creativity. I enjoyed it, even though I had to look up a couple of people. I suggest a character page.

this is definitely an interesting story.. very unique... but I LIKE IT! I'm definitely NOT a fan of 1D but this story makes me basically forget they're in a band.. they're vampires! haha and I love vampires.
this is a unique story, which a lot of the times can be hard to find. keep up the good work, update often, and I cannot wait to read more!!!!! :-)

I totally love this! Lilo just so happens to be one my top fav 1D bromance, so this warms my little shipper heart. Also, not a big Larry fan, but it's nicely written and not too forced, so I can deal. Can't wait for more!