Are You My Batman? - Comments

I like it. I really like the fact that the romance is gay, its so common now and its about time stories get written about it. So good job, I like that you say what pov every chapter is. Although I didnt read all of it i like it so far. Keep it up. Dont get down about your writing, its good.

I'm from comment swap... I don't know if I'm supposed to write that or not...:)
Sooooo I think it's a really good story and I can't wait to keep reading it. Honestly, I'm voting for Jason. The boy needs to pull his head out of his butt and face the facts lol I do think the story is a tab bit rushed though. So much is happening so fast that I think it's forced. However it is a really good storyline and I can't wait for you to elaborate on it

This whole thing seems a little forced. But that's what happens when you're still working on your talent, so that's ok. For advice I would suggest instead of saying "flashback ms. brown's class" which sounds very cliche and kinda lame...to either put dots...or a space...or even just have him say...We were in class together in eighth grade...five years ago...then recount the memory. :) Also...there are a BUNCH of cliches in here...nails across a chalkboard...kid getting slammed into a locker...gay kid getting picked on by a "straight" guy who isn't really straight...I would suggest staying away from those because then it's not your story. You're merely borrowing idea that have already been explored and not bringing anything new to the table.

I really liked the story! Especially the Rent reference. Maybe in the future you should add a fluffy Christmas scene called 'A Happy New Year'. Just a thought.

yayyyyy!!!(((: They ended up together! Go Jason on Ryley!

is it bad that i want Ryley and Jason together? :c

I love this, I can't wait for more

Now I officially feel extremely bad for him. What kind of parent does that? :(((

aww jason ):

@ october-ninja
I agree.

I feel bad for Jason now his dad just needs to die

........it's stuck fml.

Comment swap brought me here again but I do like this story!

Aw yea I want a lama! The diving was awesome. And that was a short but good chapter. I loved it :3

We all know atleast one man-whore

I WANNA LLAMA!!!!!! I saw a really cute one the other day and I wished it was small enough to carry home with me.
I like fluffyness! Iw was so cute and made me love them more. Just interspace it with other things too so we don't get bored of it too quick.

Yay I gots a llama *happpy dance*

That is so adorable, I bloody love it! I can't wAit to find out what it is!!!!

:)

Aw how cute I love this chapter!!