Are You My Batman? - Comments

I'm really enjoying this so far :)
I actually really like the way you're portraying Jason, plus I think it's great that Michael and Ryley live so close to each other. It's also a good sign that I can remember their names xD I'm usually terrible at that.
Sorry I couldn't give you a more detailed comment. If I wasn't in a rush I wouldve said more.
So I'm just putting a quick message to say I like it and that I'm looking forward to more :)

Jason is so dirty

Jason's POV Is really interesting you should keep it

Micheal seems like a nice boy

Good story

yes very short chapter but still good. it shows more on the two of them and yeah i like it!

So, I liked this in a way that it had a little bit of cutesy fluff between Michael and Ryley. I think this could use a thorough proof read because there were several instances where you used one word meaning to use another, and some capitalization mistakes. And somewhere in there you accidentally used 'defiantly' instead of what I'm assuming you meant in the context to be 'definitely'. Other than that, I think this has a lot of potential. Anther thing you may want to watch out for is not making your characters seem too feminine. Good job. :)

very nice story so far. I'm definitely intrigued as to what's going to happen between Ryley and Michael! They are just too darn cute together! and just....can i beat up Jason please for forcing himself on Ryley???
yes? no? maybe so?

wow! dude i love this story! your writing is much more mature than mine. Keep up the good work. I'll be following your story from now on.

Okay, so honestly, i had a feeling Jason wasn't that straight xD but that he would kiss Ryley ?! Okay no ! Oo That was cool ! But i don't know why, i thought that maybe, Ryley wasn't so against it, i think i'm just a little disappointed cuz i'd have liked more between Jason and Ryley (not llike sex xD not what i meant), but something before, that would given more clues etc, but okay i know the story isn't about them but about Ry' and Michael xD The latter's so cuute btw !

I like it :)

No it's not random, it's cute and completely new, i'd never seen it before !
I like where this is going, not too fast :)

More??

It is a good start, just like i like'em ;) however i feel like i'm "seeing" Frank in Ryley(which is awesome) xD i guess Frank's personnality(as a student) in fanfictions has similarities with your character, were you inspired by him?

I like this one better then your others.
It is coming along but use a little more character development.
I think you need to define the two lead characters before you do anything else and make a stronger plot line
Also i advise you to shorten your summary for the sake of suspense :)
Just so that people actually have to read and get the meaning of the story.
Also you wrote gag when it was Gay guy.
that is all.