Something in the Water - Comments

This story is simply fantastic. I love your writing; your characters seem like real people (dialogue and actions seem real and normal), you detail things well and I didn't notice and grammatical or punctuation errors. Your plot is unique and reallly well thought out. All in all I really enjoyed reading this!

Okay, I love this! I'm just now getting into it and I'm already super intrigued. I absolutely love the premise of the story, looks like a well thought out piece of speculative fiction. I also adore your writing style; it's very gentle yet evocative, and your characters seem alive. I'm going to spend a lot more time with this story when I'm a little less tired. It'll be a joy to get to the end!

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This was just amazing. I read through it in one sitting. Your writing style is beautiful, the plot is amazing, I loved your characters, it's just wow. I loved the whole setting of the story too. I can't think of anything to criticize. Great job!

I love it, just no other way to describe it. I almost cried and I laughed, it was just amazing. Good luck on the career!!

Oo, this story was amazing (:

i hate that its over but am wondering what story is next...

Yay! I loved this! I'm so sad it's over :(

I loved this story so much. It's such a great piece of literature. It gave us struggles teenagers go through nowadays and talked about adoption at its best. I'm glad I found it. Thank you so much.

You made me CRY! I HATE YOU!! butiloveyou lol

Ahhhhh omgthatwasperfectidontevencarethatshedidntendupwithsam.
More soon please!!!!!!

OMG....I'm crying.......

That's really frekin sad...its not right that in the end she had to succumb to everyones else intentions to control her own life....its just..idk :/

I will be SOOO pissed if this doesn't have a TRUE happy ending!! Arrgh I'm going crazy! There were times when I wanted to hug my screen, punch my screen, then flip out on YOU for being so unfair to Emma! Lmao I fell in love with this story

Yay I wanted it to be a girl! I was flip flopping between boy and girl, but I ultimately decided on girl.
I feel so bad for saying this but I hope something bad happens to the couple so that Emma can keep the baby.
More soon please!!!

Ohhhh I LOVE it! I wish it would never end, but it needs to so it doesnt ruin it lol. I love it

No sequel!? D: i absolutely loved that idea!! please write soon!!

Boo. I liked the sequel idea :( Okay well anyway, I still love this story. More soon please!!!

Poor em :(

Ok I REALLY hope that you didn't just tell us that this is actually gonna be happening by mentioning how the sequel would have been like by saying the teenager would have looked for its real parents cause right now its really sad and I find it horrible that their controlling EVERYTHING about her pregnancy that sucks so I'm REALLY holding out hope that their will be a happy ending and somehow shell get to keep her baby

SAMSAMSAMSAMSAMSAMSAM YAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!
Okay. Well, I think that sums up how I feel about this chapter. More soon please!!