Capitol Pawns - Comments

bootiful writing gurl; i absolutely love ur descriptions and the way you add in the suspense to your story. i luv the hunger games, especially josh hutcherson lol but this story makes me not want to read the book because it is so gud! i can't wait to c what you write next time. so glad comment swap led me to this gr8 story. thx gurl.

You're description is perfect and the tone matches the tone in the hunger games so this fan fiction is very true to the story we all know an love. I love your details about the family, about Bea. It brings the reader closer to the character and the family. This story is really well written i hope you keep it up!

That's one of the best fan fictions on "The Hunger Games". I liked the summary and the short info about each district's persons. Well done with your descriptions and dialogue too! I think that you’ve done a really good job of introducing your lead character and portraying the emotions

I love this hon. I love the way you write. :D

That's one of the best fan fictions on "The Hunger Games". I liked the summary and the short info about each district's persons. Well done with your descriptions and dialogue too. So, dear author, keep up the great work and let us see this story to the end. Don't leave it unfinished. That was all, bye. Xd

That's one of the best fan fictions on "The Hunger Games". I liked the summary and the short info about each district's persons. Well done with your descriptions and dialogue too. So, dear author, keep up the great work and let us see this story to the end. Don't leave it unfinished. That was all, bye. Xd

So, I recently discovered this story and have only read the first chapter so far. I am interested to see where you decide to go with the story and what sort of things you decide to put your characters through. I think that you’ve done a really good job of introducing your lead character and portraying the emotions that are rushing through her. I am looking forward to reading more.

I am going to be a blubbering mess when Booker dies.
Also....I don't know if I've said this (I know I said it about Remus) but I think the people/pictures/whateveryouwannacallit you chose for Booker and Scout (and Saskia...I think that's her name. District 2 girl.) are perfect.
More soon please!!!!!!!

No. Not Freya! D;
My poor baby! lol. Gee. And there goes Caspar too! Accck! I didn't want him to die either. Sigh. And I absolutely love Bookers character, he's so gentle towards the young ones, trying to keep them alive as much.

Ugh, I felt so bad for him about Caraway. I seriously wonder how you're going to end this! I seriously don't want Booker to die. And Scout has yet to show how she's a little survivor! I'm waiting for that! ... If she even is going to try, at least?

Loved all updates! (: OH! And welcome back!

:(:(:( nooo Freya!!!!! I love how Booker is like Scout's rock...
Anyway, more soon please!!! I love this story so much!!! (oh I forgot to mention in my comment from last chapter, I changed my username. I was lilac encouragement; but now obviously I'm not...)

I've never read or seen Hunger Games but reading this you have described District 7 really well, and I can imagine it. You've kinda created a image of it in my mind now, so when I do read the books I'll just be picturing your way. xD Keep up the good work! :D

AHHHH YAAAAYYYYYY FOR NEW CHAPTERSSSS!!!!!! Haha I've been working on my story (it's not up yet though) but I needed a push of motivation to get back on it lol.
Anyway, this chapter was great!!! I seriously love this story so much. More soon please!!!

Comment swapper here! First thing's first, your descriptions are amazing! I really love how you've built the relationships between your characters, it's very believable.

In chapter eight, I love how you write about how nervous Scout is. It's very poignant, and relatable. I think we've all been this nervous at one point or another.

Anyway, I don't really have anything negative to say. You're an amazing writer, and you definitely need to keep it up :)

Ah! I freakin' love this. It is awesome. Only day three in the arena and so much has happened. I can't wait to see who dies next. Thanks for entering this in my contest. :)

Hi! Comment swap! I read chapter 5.

The thing that jumps out at me about your writing is that you describe things extremely well. For example when you were describing where she was in her dream, I could picture the setting vividly. Also when you described the boy who slit her aunt's throat, I could picture him well, especially when you said his sea green eyes.

I actually don't have anything to say against this story! It's really good! Your grammar is good, and you are one of the few people who uses a comma instead of a period in quotations appropriately (guilty...), so kudos to you!

This looks really good from what I can tell! Keep up the good work!

WHY DO I TORTURE MYSELF BY READING HUNGER GAMES FANFICTIONS!? 

I don't want Booker or Casper to die! I didn't want Colby to die, but he was one of the firsts! Which made my jaw drop! But I guess that's new, THG stories I've read always kept the 'partner' alive 'till the end. I want all the mean girl tributes to die, and the two boys. I like Freya, don't want her to die either. You suck. So much. <3 you brought the characters in enough for me to already attach myself to them.

Sigh. I'm still waiting for Scout to become the awesome little shit she is!  Go go go! I love this story. I'm subscribed and have recommended! Sigh. I hope I don't cry later on.

Ok, I have to admit, I stopped breathing when they were in the nets. And when the kids from 6 came to the lake.
But yay they found water!!!! And more allies!! I like how you have more than just one ally, I'm sick of seeing the book rewritten with different names.
More soon please!!!

Please update soon!

First time reading anything of/like the Hunger Games. I have a lot to catch up on, but I look forward to the next update!