Capitol Pawns - Comments

I love the Hunger Games, have since seventh grade. Enough said. Gannon is freaking attractive and Scout is so adorable I just want to pinch her cheeks. I love the Hunger Games so, naturally, I love this story. It's also great that you made the main character younger, because the usual fics about the Hunger Games has the main character at an older age. Good job! :)

Ohmygod! I love Hunger Games!
Few things I like about this story:
- It's about Hunger Games.
- Scout is just adorable.
- Chaos is hot.
- Gannon is cute.
- Grady is just so.. hot damn.
- And I need Colby and Scout to be together no matter what you say! I don't know, and I want Colby to win for some reason. That's not even, normal okay.
This is how attached I am with the story.

I am seriously crying. I've read all the books and saw the movie. The Hunger Games are suppose to be no more! I just feel so bad for them. I like how Colby's last name is Champion. The irony in that is awesome.

I am seriously crying. I've read all the books and saw the movie. The Hunger Games are suppose to be no more! I just feel so bad for them. I like how Colby's last name is Champion. The irony in that is awesome.

First of all: YES. FINALLY AN ARENA OUTFIT THAT I LIKE.
Second of all: I seriously love all your chapters way too much.
Third of all: I love Remus. Like seriously. I think its unhealthy. If you kill him off like Cinna was killed off, I may have to kill YOU off. (Just kidding. But try not to kill Remus.)
Fourth of all: Ahhhhh I hate cliffhangers!!! More soon PLEASEE.

But then again, 6 is 17, and Scout's 12. So like I said, I could be/probably am way off.

First of all:the hair is gorgeous. AND I WANT THAT DRESS. And I happened to look more at the characters and saw that you put Remus up and let me just say fkausjsj Douglas Booth as Remus - perfection.
I think Remus is so cute!! Even though he's like a grown man. And that whole "You're my best friend" thing was so adorable I was just like "Awhh!"
Hmm I spy a hinting of romance between Scout and the boy from 6... Or I could be totally misinterpreting that.
Anyway, more soon please!!!

This comment is gonna be shorter than two combined because it's late here, I'm tired and have to get up early, and because my head hurts from crying (last dance recital and the studio's closing after this year).
Chapter 5: I really loved the end when Johanna was all like " Prove me wrong" or whatever.
Chapter 6: all I can say is that Chapter 6 is my favorite. I just loved it.
More soon please! (sorry that this comment sucks haha I'm like falling asleep right now.)

 "I’m just going to learn how to die with class." I LOVE LOVE LOVE that line.

"He’s been bred and brought up in stupidity and I can’t hold that against him." finally. Someone who realizes that that's the way the Capitol people were raised, that they're not cruel and heartless.

I ha this big long comment about how much I love this story, which you already knew, and then Safari crashed. Also I'm on my iPod and my charger keeps saying "charging is not supported with this accessory" so I really have to go. But I do love this story! More soon please!

I got SO excited when I saw that you updated!
"I’m suddenly very glad I’m dressed as a tree." Favorite line of the chapter. I don't know why, it just made me crack up.
“But I’m here to help you get noticed, to make an impression to where the audience won’t be able to ignore the little spitfire from District 7, alright?” I really like Remus. And the "little spitfire from District 7" part was my other favorite line. It was just a cute moment.
And I really liked the bit on the train where Scout asks Johanna why she changed her mind and Johanna's answer.
All in all, I just really like this whole story.
More soon please!!!!!!!!!

Ooh, I'm first!
All I can say is that you should update this all the time because it's basically the best Hunger Games story I've read on here, and after only two chapters, that's a pretty big compliment.
This is probably one of my favorite stories on Mibba, and again, that's only after two chapters.
This is also going to help me a lot, because I have plans for my own Hunger Games story, and I was kinda stuck on the beginning, so seeing it through someone else's eyes, in a different district, was really helpful.
More soon please!