I thought I commented on the last one, but I guess I didn't!!! Wow so he knows that Gerard knows and he KNEW that LONG!!! Really?? That isn't right and I just can't believe that Gerard really just...he didn't say anything. I mean yes he was sworn to secrecy but....this is his brother! He was in pain and he was hurt!!!
I loved how zacky was so sweet to Mikey and making him eat when he knows that he needs to. I have a feeling that he is going to get hurt and I don't want to see that, but things happen!! I don't know who I would want together. I think Mikey should just give up on Brendon, because he isn't worth it and if he was willing to go with Ryan and just leave Mikey like that. Then yes.
This story is such an amazing story, I'm going to miss the one you took down though :l, but I'm proud of you Anya! You're an amazing writer and you deserve this chance!!
I know I'm right. It's Frank. I know you can't see it but I'm smiling in satisfaction right now. ^_^
Damn you Brendon. Just stop running away. Face Mikey, tell him everything and let him move the fuck on! Damn it! I don't have much to say about this chapter mostly because everything is happening just as I'd expected it so... yeah. ^_^
As I'd stated before this story always makes me want to say a lot of things and after I'd posted my first comment I'd always had more to add. I hope I wasn't being a creep by sending multiple comments.
Anyways, congratulations on your book. I hope it'll go well for you and I'm totally understand about your priority being shifted. I'm in that situation too right now. Just update whenever you're able to. I'll be patient to wait.
Ok so I read this earlier but I had stuff to do so Im reviewing now. This story has been on my mind ever since I read the chapter. I cant stop thinking about it. Even earlier when I was reading 'Wild Swans' for my history project all that would come to mind was:
Ummm....so yeah this story is all i have been thinking about since I read the update. So you've still got me hooked!!!
And by the way Well Done on the novel thing!!!! You really deserve it!! You're such a talented writer and I look forward to seeing your book some day!!!!! Whats it called??
So I had a dream that I got an email saying this story had updated, and so I woke up all excited and when i got online, I realized it was just a dream and now I wanna cry ;~;
I don't want to creep you out or anything by saying this. But I dreamed of this story last night. o.O
I can't exactly remember how the dream went but... in the dream Frank is pretty. I guess I was thinking too much about this that I even dreamed about it. In the dream Frank was kinda upset that he couldn't go meet Gerard and Francis even though he was happy that Gerard could see Mikey again because he had been missing his brother or something like that.
Oh yeah... Brendon was in the dream too and he somehow knew that Mikey had left Zacky and he wanted to come back to claim Mikey. o.O I hope that's not gonna happen. Brendon... don't come back.
I'm gonna stop being a creep and just wait patiently for you to update which I hope will be soon. ^_^
Francis is still very cute, and I'm like, "Gee, how DARE you make your small child cry?" and yeah xD I hope Pretty is Frank. Frank is very pretty, after all
Ooh, yes, Brendon DOES have a ghetto ass Can Brendon come back and be black? /impossiblewishes
I totally felt like Mikey was going to go on one of those dramatic monk journeys up a mountain to like, "find himself" or whatever xD Kind of like in Batman Begins. Yeah.
Who is Pretty?? Like is it a girl? Or and guy? Wait didn't Gerard say he? I think he did. I feel so bad for Zacky. This can't be going on! No!!! I want Mikey and Zacky together. :(
I just thought about it. What if Kyle wasn't actually dead? What if Kyle faked his death, just like Brendon? And what if Kyle was actually in Ryan's gang? And that's how Gee knows about Zacky's past. That would make sense, would it? Yeah, more drama but... that really makes sense.
Sorry for another comment. I just got to get this out of my system. Now I'm satisfied. ^_^