Fate Has A Way - Comments

Update soon! Alisha is awful to the kids and Zach, she doesn't even deserve to be a mother.

Update soon! Alisha is awful to the kids and Zach, she doesn't even deserve to be a mother.

This story is making me Zach Parise fan O_O

Im not a big hockey fan and so it was a strange read for me... in fact most sports related stories are. (I do HP fan-fic) but I enjoyed it and your summary really caught me in. Im sorry to say I probably wont be subbing though, I just can't get into the hockey swing *sigh* but keep it up, I'm sure if i liked the whole sport fan fic I'd be in love with it!

Poor, poor Ryan. It's obvious he loves Maddi, but has no clue Zach is in love with her too, and holds the card blanche, being Ava's dad and seemingly Ava's preference. Now I'm just waiting for Ava to say something akin to 'I wish Mr. Zach was my daddy' or something like that. Also, wait until Ryan finds out that a) Zach is Ava's dad & b) is more then ready to get with Maddi and be a dad to Ava with the twins. Then the shit will really hit the fan.
I hope we see more of Michael and Mariann and how they feel of their dad's new interest in Ava and Maddi along with how they'll deal with their friend being their half- sister. Or just cuteness of their friendship with Ava, because I just want to see more of the kids together. Speaking of coping, wait until Maddi finds out Zach is Ava's dad. That's going to spark something. Plus, I think it's time to see a bit more of Alisha, she's been awfully quiet recently. Update soon!

I loved the update :)

AHHHH MOREEEEEE. Also that was HOTT. I kinda feel bad for Ryan because of Ava's mood.

What's with Ava? I can't wait to find out

I know Maddi had no clue at the time how Zach knows her number, but the the content of the text makes it pretty obvious that it's him, what he says clearly describes a paternity test. Also, after Maddi asked why Zach suddenly cared- which I'm surprised she didn't ask sooner- he should have had at lest some explanation. I get that he probably doesn't want to get into it with her, but he could have at least said something like 'I always cared I just didn't know where you went' or something, not "I just do." Though maybe he wanted to say that but didn't think she would take it well, thus why he hung up?
Ava seems to have already chosen Zach over Ryan, which will sting because he's known the kid her whole life and Zach waltzes in (albeit as her biological dad) and it takes about ten seconds for her to be enamored. It seems like of all parties involved Ava's going to be the happiest with the results, she gets a guy she really likes as her dad. But, good God, I understand that Ryan loves her, but in an airport, really? Plus, I smell a Zach versus Ryan fight brewing. Update soon!

Sorry I haven't commented but I was away without internet so this will be 13/14. God, I feel sorry for the twins when Zach went to see Maddi and Ava, because honestly I wouldn't want to be stuck with Alisha , who's probably pissed, so I wonder if she knew Zach was with Ava. And I don't know why but I somehow picture a Snow White scene with Zach as the prince, Maddi as Snow White and Alisha as the evil queen. I don't know why but I do.
Again, why does Zach have to confront her about paternity. It was obvious that she had no flipping clue in the grocery and he knows Ava's her daughter, so the point of confronting Maddi on things she obviously has no idea about when he already knows the answer. I'm pretty sure Ally said Maddi had memory loss so unless he thinks he can cause some sort of spark in her mind , this has no point. He could have just asked if she's curious about Ava's dad and then say what he said about a paternity test. I don't think Alisha could take Ava because it would require Maddi losing custody and that would only happen if she gave up her rights or was declared an unfit mother. I can't wait for the kids to make a bigger appearance especially the twins along with a crazy Alisha coming up with stories to make Maddi and Zach look horrid so she'd get the kids in a divorce. Update soon!

oh it will definitely be difficult to get rid of Alisha, but it would be really awesome if it happened lol

I know it's going to be difficult, but he should dump Alisha, period. She's an awful mother and anyone would be better than that, she is going to fuck up her kids forever

I loved it :) They are amazing together and Ava was so happy...

loved it :)
I still haven't given up on these two getting together!
please update soon :)

I wanna see them back togetherr:3 Alisha can fall in a hole. Shes mean!

I liked this chapter :) i hope they will realize how great they were together

I love this :3 babies and zach :333

I understand about the blah thing, sometimes you need these chapters to add information. Mmm, cinnamon rolls

Love this story!
hopefully Maddi and Zach can clear things up soon!
please update soon!

I can't wait to see what will happen next...